All Comments on 'Moments Ch. 01'

Your words have a lyrical quality I adore. More, Please!

I remember reading this story years back, and I had to go and find it again. It's just as good as I remember it. It's a lot more character driven than most submissions which is nice. I was just hoping there would've been a sequel by now.

I assume there is more to come? It doesn't stand alone so well. It seems like the beginning of a story...she dies...goes to this place...meets this "man"...chooses to be his...

a good set for the coming story.

I also think the beginning is a bit long. I think a few sentences to discuss the nature of a moment in time and how it can change everything is fine...but with several paragraphs like that it makes it too hard to get into it.

I did want to read on and was disappointed when it ended. Maybe you can continue it...