All Comments on 'Momma Melba Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Suggestion

For any future stories of this type, I offer a humble suggestion: Read Soccer Mom by Couture where the author introduces the initial event in a more likely and believable manner. The premise is too outlandish to be believable and to think the main character here did not know of her own lesbian stirrings before the encounter and that did not act logically and rationally at the initial bathroom encounter, as if think of the professional consequences, makes no sense. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
So good

This is so good, beautiful and erotic story. Would love to hear more about these two!

fastbreakplayerfastbreakplayerover 1 year ago

I've never heard of the pussy shield device. I suggest a posted picture.

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