All Comments on 'Mommy's Home Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

More please!

LittleBubbleLittleBubbleover 2 years ago
Welcome back

Congrats on becoming a girl! Wish you all the best 😘, great story as always.

TheLongGamerTheLongGamerover 2 years ago

Congratulations, and thank you for the start of a beautiful story

MaximusProtoMaximusProtoover 2 years ago

Welcome back Squish, it's been a while. Looking forward to your new stuff.

CaponerCaponerover 2 years ago

Looking forward to the rest of this story

yeeticusyeeticusover 2 years ago

Congratulations! And welcome back

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great start, and welcome back. Daddy's Home is one of my favorite stories on this site, and I love futa stuff as well, so this seems like an instant classic.

SympatheiaSympatheiaover 2 years ago

Just started reading your stuff, and I think it's great. Is Vicky a character from a previous story?

AdmiralSquishAdmiralSquishover 2 years agoAuthor

Hello again, my faithful readers! Thanks for all the love on the new story!

Sympatheia, Vicky's new, but you'll probably be seeing a lot more of her, in more than just this story- I designed her as a sort of semi-self-insert OC as part of coming to terms with my new identity. At least 50% of her design is just my own transition goals. XD

SympatheiaSympatheiaover 2 years ago

Thanks for the reply! If it's possible, I hope that at some point you can cover how and why she transitioned from the girl she used to be in the profile Yuri read to the way she is now. I assume that she was born a biological female?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Congrats on coming out! ❤❤

AdmiralSquishAdmiralSquishover 2 years agoAuthor

I just realized, I haven't said thanks to you all for the congratulations and support on coming out! It really makes me happy to know my fans have all proven to be such a welcoming, accepting group! ❤❤❤

Sympatheia, I hadn't really put much thought into explaining it until now, honestly, but yeah, now that you point it out, it would probably be good to cover that at some point, huh? ^^;

A lot of stuff that came up in this chapter is going to be explained over time- like, who and where the kids' father is, why Yuri has issues with self-esteem, why Vicky was late showing up in the first place, why Vicky moved across the country and didn't even bring her computer with her, what happened at that 'nice dinner' Vicky took them out for, why Masao insists on doing his own laundry... There's plenty of juicy lore for y'all to look forward to!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Congratulations, and welcome back! "Daddy's Home" and "Happy Birthday" are some of my favorite series, can't wait to see what else you write!

TBH, some parts of this story were a little confusing. I found the twitch chat and [bracketed asides] a bit distracting, and the Sci-Fi elements were unexpected. And sometimes dumb Americans like me have trouble keeping track of multiple foreign names in a story...

Glad you're back, looking forward to your new stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

looking forward to the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is great! I hope you're doing well, and I eagerly await the next entry in this series.

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