All Comments on 'Mom's Bed Ch. 07'

I didn't see this story taking such an unexpected turn from when it first began, but I got to say I still like it wherever you're going with it. I would love to see more interaction with his mom, after all that was how it started in the first place him sleeping with her. She just sounds so sexy and submissive. I Iove that she doesn't like to admit her desires, it makes the story so hot when he forces her to admit how much she loves what he or his sister is doing to her. Now i know our muse's takes us in directions we don't intend to go sometimes, so I'm going to sit back and see how this lovely tale continues to unfold. I know it will continue to be great because you're such a brilliant writer, so continue to entertain and let us all find out how this will all be resolved.

Thanks from miss silver766.

thanks for this chapter. turned my bad day into a pleasantly good day to see this new chapter, as well as your other new chapters. please continue this story and your others soon. i cant wait to see how this turns out.

waiting for how all this unfolds and eventually ends. it's been quite a lot of nice surprises.

Thank you so much for finally continuing this story. I had all but given up hope on finding out the ending. I know that you have mentioned that this type of story isn't your normal style and i certainly understand that it might be hard to write it to your satisfaction, but please don't make us wait another year for the next installment. Of course, I wouldn't want you to rush it either.

keep up the good work!

I loved chapter seven, hope we don't have to wait almost a year for the next submission

I've read stories with this plot but they didnt draw it out so the reader could enjoy it. The twist I've seen as well but you kept me on my toes having read stories like this and coming to Megans plot of self destruction really made this one of the best I've read, thank you and it was a pleasure reading this. BTW my keyboards F'd up and not acting right so all you grammer nazis can kiss my ass :P

I was absolutely FLOORED when I found that you had released this latest chapter. I had resigned myself to the story being left as it was and lo and behold, Christmas came early in the form of this chapter.

I have never commented on a story on here before, and I've read hundreds, but this one warrants the effort. Your story is so well layered. I feel like it's an exercise in control for you as you have done a phenomenal job of slowly building us to this crescendo and we are finally nearing its peak. Your characters are so well nuanced and believable in their own ways.

Thank You for this magnificent story and I can only hope that we won't have to wait another year for the latest installment in this masterpiece.

this story is amazing, although i am disappointed that i cannot read chapter 8. i really need ch 8. so pls dont make and all other readers wait too long.

cannot say it too often, that story is brilliant.

I have to say i absolutely love where the story's going. I was a little unsure in the middle when it seemed that he was going to build up a harem very easily but the Megan twist totally pulled me back in. I just stumbled on this story and i'm so happy i haven't been reading it since it first came out as the suspense is already killing me. Please keep the chapters coming!!

Just stumbled onto this story and am thoroughly enjoying it. You've really created a wonderful saga here. I hope the month of the bet will be posted soon.

I love it. I also love incest stories, this comprises my two favorite types, mother/son and brother/sister. All sex stories except willing cuckold stories and a few others are enjoyed by this old pervert. Too old mostly to do anything except read about it, LOL.

very nice story. a bit long. and i hope we have an ending soon

if u have a ch,08 tell at mc167@iglou .com. thank u you

Seriously, please finish this story...I hate being left hanging...

Great story....NOW FINISH IT!!!

pls?

kthxbye

I've enjoyed everything I've read from you. This has me especially intrigued. So I guess I'm begging you to continue since I am now so invested in the story. Great work!

Every now and again an author develops a story line that just consumes the reader, The character development, plot, and story line pull the reader in till you feel you know the characters. You have written one of those rare story lines. I hope you see it all the way through to the end, I also get the feeling this story is pushing some of your own boundaries and you are dealing with them as well. I look forward to seeing where you take this compelling work.

This is one of the best stories so please..............

Finish it.

Its no good leaving it like this

This is one of the sickest stories I've ever read. Yet, I could not stop reading it. Where's the rest of it?

I have read close to a thousand stories here since I found the site, and this story arc has become my favorite. I hope that you continue it because to leave it like this would be a travesty. I hope this finds you writing the next chapter, I cannot wait to see it. Thankyou in advance for the greatness that is on the way.

this cant be the last chapter, please write the next part, i have to know where this story goes!!!

heyy finish it! its an awesome story i dont say that about lots but yours is so good im surpriesed. Maybe you could have gaby end up loving brian almost as much as rhonda...

Great story but can't stop thinking you're enjoying tormenting us by the way you're leaving us hanging at this point of the story.

I have read almost all of your stories n can't believe. I decied to read this brilliant masterpeace......... Dayumm, I can't believe it took me all day, but now that I'm done reading this series I want more!!!...

P.S. I hope Brain wins tha bet n Dominates that twisted whor or she can surrender to Lisa as long as Brain keeps everyone under control so nothing bad like what Megan did happens ever again.......... Also, Brain cousin Francis needs to get beat up by his dad for letting Megan abuse his sister, what a whimp.

I actually meant " Brian " not " Brain " .......... Lol

please let there be more this an awsome series

I enjoyed the story until the non-existant ending got here. You did a good job and I would like to read your other writings, but frankly do all of your stories end so abruptly? Why read them if there is no beginning, middle, and ending?

OK, JD. I'm hooked and I kind of want to see what you do to Megan....c'mon, can you break her?

I do not like S&M.

I despise the thought of "slaves"

I dislike the intentional infliction of severe pain to a partner

However, despite all of that, I REALLY like this series and where it has gone. So much so that these are the first comments I have ever written, despite hundreds of story ratings. You have not changed my feelings with regards to my first 3 statements, however I really appreciate how you have drawn the distinction between a loving relationship where one person is more dominate and the relationship I find so distasteful of M/S.

I am outside of my usual comfort zone, especially as you artistically need to paint Brian as so extremely dominate and able to have any woman he wants, but I am really looking forward to the next chapter. You have made most of the characters quite relatable and have taken the time to explain the psyche of all so that the less-relatable characters are at least understandable. Thank-you for your efforts in the creation of this great tale!

Was a very good series but the domination contest is just stupid.

half way (halfway)

thoughts (that) battled inside my head

all so obviousness (obvious)

both sister (sisters)

long term (long-term)

muscle bound (muscle-bound)

having to so with me (do)

lasts (-the) longest (longer)

open ended (open-ended)

good change (chance)

Gloria elbow (Gloria’s)

Rhonda and my relationship (Rhonda’s)

bit I'd also have (but)

cousins house (cousins’)

weak minded (weak-minded)

could care less (couldn’t)

The bets off (bet’s)

(-Megan), don't do this," she said (MEAGAN IS THE SPEAKER) (Gabby)

kind hearted (kindhearted)

dominate male (dominant)

then her actually (than)

WHAT’S GOING ON through the bedroom door both last night and today to understand WHAT’S GOING (ON) between Megan and you

It lifting Megan's ass (lifted)

my mother case (mother’s)

not so in (-Rhonda's) case (Megan’s)

jumped at the crack (as)

(-delved out) (delivered)

I felt silent (fell)

close up (closeup)

twenty four (twenty-four)

none the less (nonetheless)

temp me (tempt)

left over passion (leftover)

wasn't something I (-wasn't) into (was)

She gasped (-out)

once I train her that it (is)

took my time sand paused (and)

slaps weren't gently either (gentle)

pent up (pent-up)

hand print (handprint)

sister and my (sister’s)

that I needing it (needed)

The part about the "bet" is a bit too far and doesnt really help the story as much. It almost seems "wierd" - almost.

Too much analysing and too little action.

Bro u disappointed in this one.

I'm just going to pretend this great series ends at chapter 6. What a shame!

Loved the series until the first page of this entry. Couldn’t get through it and gave up on the story. Way too much drama and mind games for this type of story. If you wanted to make a story about domination and contests between domineering people, then write one about that. Don’t mix it into a story about other things.

Another really enjoyable story.