by FOUNTAINPEN67
This is so my kind of story you can't possibly fuck it up. Take this as far as you can, looking forward to more. Thanks for a great read.
max052
Consolidate your story. It's doesn't need all these separate "chapters" under different headings. Just write the story out. It's hot, no doubt, I do like it a lot, but for the love of Mike, read some other stories and get better descriptions for how a person touches themselves besides "fap fap fap". It would increase the quality of your work. Keep at it!
fap fap fap fap nothing but loses the reader. I know what your trying to do but it removes the rhythm of the writing and stops the story I just skimmed to the end to see if ou did better next one.
a boy calls his mother's vagina her "cunthole." And when a mother tells her boy that the vagina she's frigging is where "you came out of 18 years ago." Boys love thinking about their own mother's vagina and they have lots of names for it. "My mother's cunt" is the most common. I like "the twat I came out of" and "my mother's tasty twat." Also, "her son's semen-catcher."
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TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE! TERRIBLE!
sounds just like that here now LOL..except it's more slopp slopp slopp!!!
Very nice Bill, very nice!!!
Oil up your son when the sun is about to set...unless she was wanting to get a rise out of him.
wow - great scene. no real sex, but very sexy. great job writing erotica!
From a psychological standpoint, who better to alleviate the embarrassment of masturbation than with your mother. Her willingness to perform the same act in front of her son only demonstrates the normalacy of such act. Finally, she further demonstrates that she recognized her son as a maturing male. Hopefully, the son recognizes and accepts the fact that his mother is also a normal woman. 5 stars.