All Comments on 'Mom's Business Trip Ch. 01'

wonderful writing, you had us all there as voyeurs

THIS IS TRIP I WOULD LOVE TO MAKE. YOU REALLY MUST DO ANOTHER CHAPTER TO ALLOW US TO SEE HOW THE LOVE BETWEEN MOTHER AND SON PROGRESSES AND GROWS. THANKS AND GOOD LUCK

Great build up.

Really like this one. Ch.2 soon?

a lot of fun to read. hopefully the trip goes on and there's even more fun!

Great story. I loved the way you built it up to that finally.

Very well done. I loved the build up. you could feel the passion building in them during the flirting stages. I hope you continue their love.

Love the story!!! Could be great to see out how they evolve together?

I did enjoy this story. Lusciously and erotically told.

Great story

As soon as it came to 'big girl'. 5'8", 158 lbs and 34F, things didn't match up!

Be realistic, what was it actually? 34,38,48? to make up for mass? Pear shaped? Ugh! Some fantasy!

Outa here!

34f bra would be about 40. Say 35 waist and 38-40 hips would be about right.

Not Marilyn Monroe, but plenty sexy.

Without a doubt this is one of the best stories in this genre (mother/son) that I’ve ever read, and believe me I have read a ton of them. Keep up the good work!

Would like to see them do more together. Maybe some public/risky stuff? Or have an aunt join in?

Loved the story and can't wait for the next chapter! Just a quick note from the spelling Nazis, you can "peek" or glance at big tits. Now if those tits were on a mountain top, you'd have to climb to that mountain "peak" in order to "peek" at her tits. Still got five stars and a favorite point from me!

Took such a long time to get there, I expected the French girl he spoke to early on to reappear and hurry things along..... before we all fell asleep.

Really good story, can’t wait to read more about this mother and son pair, the build up was really good, and let’s hope this new couple have more shenanigans in France.

Just the right amount of sexy and kinky kinda hope to see her give him a foot job in public from under the table. I wonder if she is young enough to get pregnant.

I loved it thought it was tasteful yet sexy and erotic.

I five starred ya just because I could tell you put great time into this one. Well written. Next time I'd like to see a little more seduction, some voyeurism, some reluctance......but all in all this is a good story!

Well done!

Please. So much left undisclosed.

Please please please, release chapter 2 soon

I loved this story. very erotic, sexy and romantic.I want to see chapter 2 please. I know she enjoyed having her sons thick long cock inside her hot pussy. she did not want him to take it out, so sexy,

Hey guys I was wondering if I could get some help finding a story kinda close to this? A mother and son go on a trip to like India or some other foreign country but the hotel they booked wasn't what the add said and they had to stay the night at a run down trashy co-ed hotel. The next day they were taken on a tour and the mother was seduced and gangbanged. If anyone knows a name or even puts a link I would be greatfull!

Loved the story. Gave it 5 stars simply because there was no way to give it more! Would love to see Eva get involved with a threesome and have them change partners once Eva finds herself a young stud.

You have to write more chapters soon as possible. Please more

WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE

WILL MOTHER AND SON GET IT ON WITH HER NEW COLEGUE;S

AS IF NOT BE THERE COULD TROUBLE IF THEY WANT TO COME TO SEE

THERE WORK IN HER COUNTRY AND THAT SHE HAS LIED TO THEM ABOUT

HER SON.UNLESS SHE DIVORCES HER HUSBAND SHE CAN AFFORD TO

Can you please Wright more chapters 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁

👏✊👍👍😎 Awesome. Great story. Are you not going to continue this series. Please😫🙏🙏💓 continue with this series. It is wonderful✨😍.

Don't lead ppl on and not write Ch 2..

Full of beautiful and affectionate feelings. A loving story you hope will never end.

If you get to know me you will know that I love a great mother-son story even more that a father daughter story. This is one of the best I have read. There is something so special about a mother and son together. This story seemed very realistic and I could picture it happening. I am sure many more mothers and sons have bonds like this than we realize and I think it is great. More stories like this one please.

Almost came when they were in the hot tub! The moms ass 🔥very hot story thanks

you need to continue

meh

This was perfect. The perfect balance of flirtation, seduction, reality, and fantasy. The way you described every sexual encounter was mind blowing and I just wished someone would come make love to me like this.

Loved this one

Looks like things may change when they get back & Matt will be enjoying his mother every chance he gets. As for Eva and her husband, well, it looks like he's just plain out of luck. Well written story, John.

Good pace, hot, please take “ I began to mimic the alphabet” out of your writing, That was the only thing that broke the flow.

I LIKE it

I Love Mother's Son Lovemaking Story.

I Love your writing I look forward to read continue.

I Like it

I Love Mother's Son Lovemaking Story.

I Love your writing I look forward to read continue.

Don't they ever use the toilet?? It is right there---have them use it. Pee games, or even just listening to her tinkle would have made the story better.

Is there going to be MORE to this story? I liked it and would like to see it continue in Paris and home.

Yes the bathroom tinkling would be a great addition also. May be a little water sports.

Mother pees and so does son on her clit. LOL

A really great story with nice character build up. Sadly is a part 1, but over a year later nothing has been done to continue, possibly with some extended time in Paris , with more lust between them and more, and possibly bring it to a nice satisfying conclusion.

A good story with nice build up and character development. It has been over a year since pt1 was written. Now the story needs to continue with possibly more time in Paris together, and then a long term commitment from both of them !

It was that kind of story you could skip over a bunch of paragraphs and not miss a thing. Three pages would have been more than enough.

sadly i dont think the author will continue here..two stories around a year old without any sign of life.

was an interesting start... could've def. gone further.

hope I'm wrong and the author will somehow continue

This is the second time I've read this and it is so fucking hot. We need more. More please?

Please continue.

Every boys fantasy.

The kid had never left the country but had a passport so he could head to France on a week's notice? Same with his mother.

After an all night flight to Paris there is not mention of breakfast or lunch. Then when she comes back from her meetings they go for a swim, have a shower and go to bed with no dinner? Not likly

Read it a few times now and still enjoy it. Readers when expect stories to go the way they want should right their own. Otherwise enjoy the craft and move on.

Vivid description of seducing. The jacuzzi broke the ice and as said earlier both became bed partners like a married couple.

Very hot and cock hardening story

please write more of this story

I liked this story in particular because of the scenario and the setting. I wish there was already another chapter because I keep imagining her ending up a mental case. Mostly because of her being hesitant, and seemingly unsure at first. But I'm sure you could write something on a happier note. Now I'll tell you what I liked most. The description of Eva. My mind went straight to Adrienne Barbeau. She's 75 now. But back in the day wow! She exudes sex. Cross her with Raquel Welch and there you have Eva.

Pls continue the story

Peek is a quick, or furtive look.

Ground is the past tense of grind.

Led is the past tense of lead {guide, or go in front}.

Just some information to help you with your writing.

It's been almost two years since chapter one came out. Are we ever going to see chapter two?

You need to finish the second chapter soon please.

PLEASE......write chapter 2 SOON !!

I came twice reading this! I just wish you would write a series. thank you for a great story

Very hot. Passionate. Loved it

Deserves a sequel

OMG! I just ran across this story and Boy it is Hot!! Incest aside, (and that doesn't bother me), this could have been any man with any woman. What a lucky guy he would be!!! This has to have a sequel...it is too good to let it languish. PLEASE go on with your story!!! 5+++++ stars!!!

For the love of gawd, MOAR!!! This story has been out for two years and you don't have any more parts? For shame, lol!

Please continue the story!!!

(8/26/2021)

This was great! How about chapter 2? It's been two years. Please continue this series. This has so much potential. 5 stars! Listen to your readers.

Please continue, we need a sequel

A great story. I sure enjoyed it. I'm not one that usually wants more but OMG, I WANT MORE to this story. It was HOT, sexy, and so sensual.

Fan-Fuckingtastic!

Very well done.

Yes there's things that need tweaking.

Most women don't scream things, as they cum. They "Growl" them like an animal, or an unrepentant demon. lol!

Most of Europe's women when by a private pool, are naked.

There are no cougars in Europe. It's not uncommon as you think, to see an older woman and a younger man out on the town.

Please write more to this story, there's so much fertile ground here.

WB

Ok every hotel has privacy between the bedroom and the bathroom especially in Europe you said city of romance so your talking about Paris France so saying there was no privacy in the room and everything is completely unbelievable there was quite a few errors in the story and it just didn't captivate the readers too much however it has potential with that being said I'll give it 3 but with what I stated just now are big ones and just can't be overlooked

I'll be very surprised if we'll ever see a chapter two in this series. It's been a couple of years since the author has published a story in this category.

With a chapter 1 tag o expected a 2

Nevertheless not bad as is

Many of the scenes are unlikely, the descriptions sketchy, but the buildup to sex is great, as is the sex itself.

I read this story on Wattpad it also has more parts there. Unfortunately the account has and story has been deleted

What a great cum! Thank you!

Part 2 published May 27/22...IMHO, WWW; Well Worth Wait. Now then, time to start bugging author John about Ch 3.

*****

She, her, she, her .... WTF is wrong with most authors here? The real erotica in mother-son incest comes from continuously highlighting the familial bonds by often refereeing to characters as mother, mom etc. Most stories and their authors miserably fail in this critical department, entire paragraphs would be constructed simply using she, her. Who the fuck is 'she'? I might as well be reading another run of the mill bland adult fiction. 2 stars due to this fatal flaw.

It was great although I think the end would have been better with the husband not wanting his wife anymore. And the wife and son stay there.

Thank you! Pay no attention to the naysayers. I loved every word.

"I want you to call me Mom.." She said, "Just for now."

My step daughter never called me “mom” until we became intimate. Then looking up at me from between my legs, while licking me, she paused and said, “I love you mom.”

Thank you again

R

whew...! smoking hot-the very end, when she wants him to stay inside her...

and no guilt...her husband doesn't want her anymore, and her 'new' husband does...

five and fave, and real curious where Ch 02 goes

PS But of course Matthew packing...

peek, not peak

vagina inside her, vulva exterior, and never a mention if smooth or landing strip, or, preferably lush but neatly trimmed muffin

about impossible to hide that glow after first fuck-her new workmates all going to see/know they got some last night

Damn that was hot as heck. Quite loving and tender too at the end. I hope the second part keeps this going and doesn't turn out to be a let down.

The only thing that would have made this better was if mom had had an extremely thick and hairy pussy that spilled from the top and sides of her bikini!

Reminds me of my mother. Our love was always intense like this.

Matthew's mother sounded bigger than he was. Her tits were overwhelming. She seemed to be the dominant with a really big ass. 3 stars is being nice.