All Comments on 'Mom's Deep Love Ch. 07'

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goducks1goducks1about 5 years ago
fantastic

WOW - one sexy story. love the characters - and the sex. well written. 5 stars!

angelmom37angelmom37about 5 years agoAuthor
Best so far

This is the best installment so far! Sabrina is one crazy nymph! Looks like love is in the air too. Where does it go from here?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
OMG

You have to write more, this story was riveting and there is so much more in the ways this could go, just keep it real and don't do something crazy like make the grandma pregnant, and then maybe you can do a multi generation thing

Geisha1Geisha1about 5 years ago
5 stars

I hope this story continues for many chapters. Great characters, great sex. Love this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
More

Given the hound dog Sean & Brian's father is and/or was there are probably other siblings and mothers out there to find, maybe while at college?

prop69prop69about 5 years ago
Awesome stories...I go crazy for all stories

I look forward to the next chapter.,, HOWEVER

The WORST WAS WITH SEAN AND marcus

I GAY STORY WAS THE ABSOLUTE WORST.

I almost stopped reading.

I enjoy the lesbian incest stories, but NO UNRELATED, BUTT FUCKING

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearabout 5 years ago
Sean/Brian Brian/Sean

You Have to be careful when writing stories like this. You have called Brian, Sean multiple times. It can be annoying and distract the reader. I also wish you would have drawn out this ending having everyone end up pregnant at the same time was a bit much. Stacy should have ended up pregnant first, from 'honeymoon suite' romp. Dania next by Sean from 'kitchen' romp. Lydia after by Brian from 'Mom/Son' bedroom coupling. Then Sabrina from Brian from 'breakfast 3some with Dania'. All finding out with in a few days of each other over a two week period. Then in discussions to keep family secrets safe, decide moms' 'les marriage' with 'donor's' sperm and then Brian marry Sabrina and Sean marry Dania, all to keep things legal and save face for family business. But in reality all 7 are always together in what ever combo they decide at the time. Working things like this out ahead of time is an important thing for an author to do. keeps things flowing evenly. While, keeping things less confusing for the readers.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

I like incest and pregnancy but only when it is wanted. The intimacy, passion and love of the characters for each other is what makes this story so mentally pleasing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Mentally pleasing? Ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

Oh, it's mental alright. Just mental!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loving it all 5 stars

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