All Comments on 'Mom's Lover and Mom! Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Where was the incest?

This wasn't incest. Guess you'll get to it in the next chapter. Well written, but failed to excite due to the story's length. Keep writing, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very nice!

Good, sexy writing and plot too! 4½/5...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Casie?

Who the f*ck spells Casey like that?<BR><BR>I guess UNDEReducated writer wannabes do, huh?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome!

Please please please post part 2!!!! Awesome!!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Good story line, but could use an editor

a good story and I hope that there's another chapter. a little rough that an editor would clean up. Still a good story though. Thanks .....Rich

C_frommnC_frommnover 14 years ago
Can't Wait

to See where Casie Mom and Monica go from here

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wheres part 2

You have got to finish this

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

More!!!!!! Casie's gotta get with his mom!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
TWO MOMS

I had a similar experience but it started differently. My mother and her best friend were having a lesbian session when I went into mom's room. Unaware of my existence I stripped down anf mucked Mary Jane while she was eating mom out, and I got her pregnant. My mom was already pregnant by me with our second child. We had four children altogether.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Chapter 2?

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594194 months ago

Tease

🙈🙊🙉🤢🤮🤬

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