All Comments on 'Mom's Mountain Cabin Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Yes, a very hot story ... he is such a lucky guy to be wanted sexually not only by his girlfriend but his Mom too. They can all interchange ideas, positions, bodies etc. You cannot get any more open and flexible than that. Hopefully, the next step is to edge Scarlett so she can squirt her pussy juice in very large amounts all over his Mom and John. This causes Mom to return the favor to Scarlett and drench her. I am sure this will get even better. Thank you !

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Fantastic! Can't wait for part 2!!!

Amazing job, instant top 5 favorite after just one read. Keep 'em coming.

chimpeechimpeeover 7 years ago
LUCKY JOHN

Breast of Both Worlds great opening chapter wonder what Scarlett's family are like or into

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 7 years ago

The usual MA instant classic!! So fucking hot! Five plus stars and a favorite point!! I can't wait for chapter two to be published.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Chapter two's a must.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice!

A few typos, but a nice twist to a classic tale.

xx

burrito54burrito54over 7 years ago
wow

really nice first part can't wait to read part 2. keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
english

like I what language is that

oldwayneoldwayneover 6 years ago
What a Mom!

Loved it...Five Stars!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
*****- (5-): LIKE IT

:-)

Jackspeed2uJackspeed2uover 3 years ago

Detritus- the left over decaying parts of organisms or their parts as well as their fecal matter. That’s a by the book definition. It has now expanded to be the dead and decaying stuff and it’s broken bits and poop.

So how does this ever relate to a fucking orgasm? Riding the detritus of her orgasm.

You are retarded. Yet again you over reach putting in words or phrases that don’t fit the character’s age, experience or status. Then you just stuff it up by being just plain wrong.

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