All Comments on 'Mom's New Family Affair Ch. 07'

Love the series and gave this a 5 star rating but I didn't think this was anywhere near as hot as the previous chapter. This was meant to be a bridge chapter laying the foundation for future chapters. I can't wait for those.

WOW, keep going with this it has kept me going every morning! I love it! I can't wait until Kari cums for a visit. good work!! thank you! :)

Each time I see the next chapter in the New Submissions list, I know I'm in for two sessions of reading, and therefore cumming. Its a constant battle with edging but these scenes are too hot to make it to the end of the story. Knowing there is more to read is the excuse to take the edge off and start again.

Agree this last chapter was a bit of a bridge. Chapter Five was infuego! I think John needs some backup though. Great stuff!

And, yes, it 5-star material. But it's not "spare of the moment" but rather "spur of the moment". And it's still not a "chase lounge" but rather a "chaise longue".

The use of the word chuckle is becoming distracting. Every paragraph has someone chuckling, and at least half the time it doesn't seem appropriate to the sentence. Other than that... it's a great read.

The editing needs to be drastically improved...it's very annoying to find so meany mistakes.

All this discussion, and the question "What do we tell Dad?" never gets asked? Add in all the grammar problems, and very disappointing.

Page 4; one paragraph states that John let go of his mom's hair, & the very next paragraph states that John still had possession of her hair........????? Could do with a LOT of proof reading before submitting..?