by BlueJames
I already sent feedback but I will still say here that I love your story, keep going!
Love how the story is going ...please dont make us wait as long for the next chapter
Let’s just hope that we don’t have to wait almost a full year for chapter 4, and wouldn’t it be icing on the cake if Claire was able to further humble Hayden - you know with a “exactly where do you think you’re gonna put that monstrosity, mister?”
Time for a little bit of reality here, there are very few real world women who'd relish the idea of 11” of cockmeat.
I'm liking it so far. But how you are writing Hayden as a dominant is off putting.
I would prefer more mother son time. And the others just to add a veriety to the story. Not be the main characters. Have to see how I feel about the sister being involved.
That could be hot.
Man, this series is hot, please hurry with the next chapter, maybe if Charlie gains his confidence by knocking haydens lights out, because hayden blackmailed his mom and sister into fucking him. Then Charlie's mom and Claire became grateful to Charlie and he becomes the top dog in his school.
Someone have the old version of this story? It's called Stamina Training for Son, have 3 parts
Really interested in seeing how Hayden’s relationship with Sarah will play out.
Exciting read, hopefully next chapter isn’t too far away!
I look forward to finding out who will "win" the coital clash between Sarah and Hayden (if it happens). In the first masturbation scene you showed your awareness of how obstacles to be overcome can carry the story forward, so if Hayden rings Sarah's bell before she makes him pop, it would create many plot conflicts that would keep this story well out of the simple stroke story (not that there's anything wrong with that, but you seem to want a story with a decent plot) zone.
Hoping to get more mommies involved. Maybe a mommies support group for their handsome teenage sons. Teasing them every which way to teach them stamina. Segway eventually to daddies supporting training for beautiful daughters. I can imagine all kinds of possibilities . You are a skilled writer and I look to more from you and additional series.
There’s been no mention of the Mothers needs. No thought for the partner. Hopefully the boys realise their selfishness.