All Comments on 'Mom's Sweaty Ride Ch. 03'

I usually archive all chapters but i won't archive the third chapter as it completely destroys the previous two.

Thanks for first two chapters, that's why i won't rate this story (would be 1 star otherwise)

I understand your comment you are "writing a story with sex not a sex story." This is your ride we are just along as passengers. Thanks for sharing your talent. Take it where you want your story to go and if others don't like the direction stop and let them off.

Damn !! What an exciting take of mom and son in the backseat story. Keep the the tip up Tommy......

But can understand trying to write a story with sex in it, than sex with a flimsy story.

I applaud what you have done here.

Story suggestion/request:

Maybe a bit of kink. A bound, spread-eagle woman, at the mercy of her lover is a turn on.

And more foreplay.

Thanks

I agree with the author comment at the end of the chapter.

I think is not only sex in the tale, here is something more...

I don`t know if I like the next chapters, if the story turns to extremely lust, sorry but, I´m a strange kind of romantic, and I respect the family relationship. I know this is an incest story, but as the author say it, this is an story with sex in, not an sex story, I hope you maintain the same line for the next chapters.

Good job.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

I like that it's more of a story.

Hopefully the 3 of them can come to some sort of an arrangement, and Ben will clean up his act.

A fantasy-driven premise about a taboo couple fucking in a confined area on the cusp of getting caught at any moment, suddenly pulls a sharp turn and brings in drastic changes to remove all the elements that make the story exciting and niche. The result is a story that reads like every other story on this site. I respect your choices, but for once I had hope that you realize what the core element of your story was and what made it different from the rest. Who knows, maybe the dad will wake up with no memory of the car ride. But fuck, what a waste of a chapter, and so what if they have a lot of sex next chapter, it will read like every other story on this site.

This is a nice and unexpected twist. Please don't make me wait too long for episode 4. Waiting with bated breath for the sex, especially a 69 on the notorious backseat.

"Just kill the dumb nigger jock husband already!

#Tr(d)ump2016"

An ignorant, illogical, bigoted and irrelevant comment from another inbred retard, so go eff yourself, bubba!

And yeah, Its HRC_2016, all the way

'corrected'

Hahahaha!!!

Don't know if I should laugh or be appalled at the change of scene....or something....in Chapter 3. Is this erotica or comedy now?

Lolz. Awaiting 4.

I thought it was good, a story can have ups and downs and different themes in it. I a writer myself and I've been working on a story for here that has a bunch of different themes throughout it. It's your story and don't go changing it to make people happy. please don't make us wait too long. I know as a reader and a writer I write the whole story first then I will post the chapters every day or so, but my story will be long.

Will chapter 4 have a lot of the mom riding sons cock ?

An unexpected pregnancy would be a good twist

I have no problem with the direction the story has taken. Those who don't like it should move on or write their own story. I would like to recommend some heavy-duty proof reading, though. There were parts of the story that became difficult to read. Maybe you are rushing too much - I don't know, but if I have to stop to figure out which word you meant to use (for example 'amnesia') it makes your story less enjoyable. Just my opinion for what it's worth. Keep at it!

I like that you took the high road with the plot and it wasn't just a straight forward sex story.

Or even dieing on the table, however, you are the writer and much better at it than I could ever be. Great job to this pont. Keep up the good work.

It is not listed anymore.

...mysterious.

I loved the twist of Brad confronting Kim about having sex with their son. How could he of not have known what was going on so it makes the story plausible. If it was my choose I would have Brad not making it through surgery. Kim & Tommy can move on with starting a new life together. She could already be pregnant with her sons baby. Or she could help him get through college then get pregnant. Just ideas.

Probably the best story I ever read in this genre. Looking foward to part 4. In which Ben will become a vegetable and see them fuck everyday in front of him. Then the son became jelous and murderous to other kim's sex partners since now she can't get enough just from the son hahaha. Well done sir/madam.

Just silly now. She loves him then she does not. He is horrible to her but lets have a baby. This guy I love might be dying but lets go have sex. Entire family is insane.

You tease! That shower scene was so fucking hot when she pushes back to get his cock deeper in her ass. Then stupid Tommy ruins it! Get the fuck out, kid! Oh, well. Maybe in a future installment...

This is a well thought out story, comes so close to my own reallity, sends shivers down my spine, we are still together after 23 years, pop died on th surgery table, n mom doe's not have th pain any more of a ruthless man dictateing to her, or th continuois rape of her body n mind. Anon

I like the acknowledgment that they weren't as secretive as they thought they were. And that the father wasn't always a prick while still keeping the love between Mother and son. I'm really looking forward to how they work it all out.

Wish Ben would have pounded her ass and made Her scream so loud in pleasure, her son could hear it.

I agree with what another comment wrote that this has been taken to the levels of unrealistic and has been ruined, also too out of hand now.

Whoaaaaa! Stop the trolley now. I know, you wrote this story quite awhile back. So, it's way too late to bring this up I guess. I understand the foot fetish. I'm not a foot fetisher myself but, I figure that whatever gets a person off is their business.

However, she had just walked 100 yards on hot pavement, sidewalks, and possibly grass barefoot. Then she walked barefoot into a bathroom used by hundreds of people daily. She stayed in there for awhile. She probably did go into a stall to go to the bathroom. Barefoot still. Then, when she was finally done she walked barefoot all the way back to the Jeep. Barefoot.

Then, after all that, he stuck that nasty barefoot into his mouth? And that is erotic for someone? Have the people that have the foot fetish ever heard of nasty bacteria doing bad things to people? Gross!!! That's what that was. Just gross.

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Wife is a flighty person who doesn’t know what the hell she wants! First she wants a divorce and loves her son but enjoys husbands dick in her ass in the shower then decides she loves husband but wants son also???? Do you really think the son will put up with that shit?? He would dump her ass in a heart beat!!!

At least we have story not just blow jobs & cum

Your story doesn’t make sense when it comes to comparing the father and son’s cock size. In your earlier stories you make it seems as if her son’s cock has filled her pussy to the brim even hurt her because he forced it to deep but now your saying that the father has a cock that is so large that it scares her, the same cock that she has been fucked by for over 18yrs. Who has the largest cock the father or the son🤔

Really not liking how you kept the dad in the story hes a 300lb asshole

I believe this was the only way to save the story. A very different remake of yes one of my favorite stories. I look forward to #4. Also. She reminds me of my dearly departed wife. "Oct. 2002" breast cancer; (Yes I was that lucky)!

Good up till this chapter. Making Ben be a complete asshole then them forgiving him and appears to want to make things work. Guess mom wants to have both husband and son. Also the near rape that she was getting off on and her husband "horse cock?" Come on really. I guess I will read the last chapter just to finish the story but see it's headed in a direction that doesn't match the story of the 1st 2 chapters.

The thought process of the mother is just a perfect example of how domestic abuse plays out.

- he was good once

- since he was good once i'll forgive him

- even though i kinda got raped (by my husband) i still love my husband

- and he wanted to enslave us but thats fine aswell

And trying to justify the rape with Ben's reason behind it, is completely beyond me.

Rape should not be forgiven regardless of whom it is, you don't rape someone by accident.

I'm a bit torn and confused at how this chapter ended. but I agree with Mogelbaum below. Drunk or not he still tried to rape her and there can never be any justification for it, NEVER! Don't know how the author can reconcile the husband in this relationship. I can't see him involved in the marriage and still have a relationship with his son. One of them has to go. The next chapter is the last chapter in this series and was submitted in late 2016. Hope the ending wasn't screwed up or the series abandoned. I'm reading chapter 4 and hoping for a stroke of genius at the end.

Anyone who thinks Ben is an alcoholic rapist, should keep in mind, she KNEW he was driving drunk and rather than even wear a seat belt, much less GET OUT, had sex in the back seat with her son. Have you been in the car with a drunk person before and not buckled up? That broke suspension of disbelief right there, and he knew what was happening anyway! Lucky all around (plot armor) he didn't think to ram the first overpass column he sees, because he'd be the only survivor. Guess the fact he'd get life for double manslaughter under the influence maybe tempered him.

Continue to enjoy the story; however, I am sorry to read that the mother refuses to realize that she has married a has been. She has a degree in biology. She does not need him financially. She has a lover in her son who loves and respects her.. So far husband is guilty of drunk driving and rape. She believes he was going to make a slave of her. She has no idea what he would do to his son. The smart thing to do would have been to let the son kick him in the head a few times. The fall covers all sins.

terrible english grammar. 1star.

"As horrible as what he had tried to do to me I was still his wife and the kind of pain he would be feeling I wouldn't wish on my worst enemy." -Kim (pg. 2)

Not sure if you're talking about the fall, broken bone, or the needle from the pain meds but either way; there are things more painful if you're creative enough and if he hadn't have fallen then her son would have gotten the shit beaten out of him and probably beaten to death with how unstable Ben is. Also, he tried to rape her in the ass, it's the fucking least he deserves. Nothing gives anyone the right to rape someone (except raping someone else IMO, then I'll allow it because that's how they do it in prison).

PSA: BONERS AND WET PUSSIES DO NOT EQUAL CONSENT. Just needed to add that.

Other than that, this is all super hot.

Nope, the second she started to justify Ben's actions and behavior by "he's not usually like this" then go back and rewrite him as more pleasant because you've ruined his character and now hers for excusing him.

She said no, she fought back, and he tried to rape her. She may be in a frisky mood now, but that wasn't when he was sticking his dick in her ass with no prep or lube. You've already written Ben as a horrible person and abusive husband (verbally, sexually, and physically no matter what you have her claim), there's no him suddenly changing his entire personality. I was actually really liking this but you ruined it all. The only person who's not toxic is their son. At least he's a decent person. Ben is abusive scum and Kim excuses it, not caring how it affects her son as long as she's sexually gratified (because her son isn't enough after fucking her all day? If I were him, I'd leave her to her misery with Ben because he obviously can't stand him just going off the fact that he was disappointed that Ben was still alive).

Nope, the second she started to justify Ben's actions and behavior by "he's not usually like this" then go back and rewrite him as more pleasant because youve ruined his character and now hers for excusing him.

She said no, she fought back, and he tried to rape her. She may be in a frisky mood now, but that wasn't when he was sticking his dick in her ass with no prep or lube. You've already written Ben as a horrible person and abusive husband (verbally, sexually, and physically no matter what you have her claim), there's no him suddenly changing his entire personality. I was actually really liking this but you ruined it all. The only person who's not toxic is their son. At least he's a decent person. Ben is abusive scum and Kim excuses it, not caring how it affects her son as long as she's sexually gratified (because her son isn't enough after fucking her all day? If I were him, I'd leave her to her misery with Ben because he obviously can't stand him just going off the fact that he was disappointed that Ben was still alive).

That's a good way to start a transition. No ending yet, just beginning a new era of their lives. Good tale so far. Dad has no memory after the surgeries and recovery. They all continue and he is different a kinder man. Mom and Son continue but carefully and wisely discreet. In the future perhaps Dad passes away with complications arising from his falls.

In the first chapter, Tommy has a bigger dick than his dad. In this chapter, Ben (the father) suddenly has a "horse cock" that stretches Kim painfully. The author clearly forgot about continuity when he got aroused by the prospect of having Kim fuck an even bigger dick. Ah well, we'll just retcon it in our heads.

There seems to be a hefty amount of conflict within the wife. The husband's massive levels of assholery seems to be getting tolerated because he was a good man early on in their relationship but life got him down and he became bitter. Sorry, that's no excuse. Once he starts treating you like shit, it's time to draw the line. If he then continues, you cut that asshole loose.

I understand where the author was coming from with this chapter. I was initially very critical and thought, "fuck this shit, I hate it, attempting raping in the shower, come on man". But I can also see things from the dad's perspective. Again, it's no excuse to behave like an animal. He needs to seek help and do what's best for his family now: leave the mom and son to be together and love each other like how him and his wife should have all through their marriage, before he made the critical mistake to essentially give up on them.

The wife should realize what's best for her and her son too: divorce the husband, convince him to seek help about his drinking problem, and then move on with her son (assuming the husband has memory loss that was mentioned, which seems contrived but whatever, he doesn't need to know about that part). I think she is beginning to see this, so there's hope at least. I applaud the author for writing a more realistic story with some drama rather than just kinky sex in the backseat. That was unexpected but ultimately very enjoyable.