All Comments on 'Mom's Uncovered Pussy'

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AlunCarregTheWelshmanAlunCarregTheWelshmanalmost 7 years ago
your maths are not

19 from 34 = 15 now that is a criminal offence anywhere in the world , but good luck to you if you can get away with it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
15 Year olds do get pregnant...

The math does work. Sorry you morals do not realize that!

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
She can be hot @ 34, 36, or 38 and still be amazing.

Wish authors would be a little more realistic. Not many families let them marry that young. Still a good story

mschack63mschack63almost 7 years ago
Totally ridiculous

The age thing plus statements like "her tongue chewed on my tongue" earned you one star.

MomspankerMomspankeralmost 7 years ago
Meh

To address a few other comments.

First if you are reading Incest porn the complain of morals should never be written. This is in a sense a moral-free zone. So if you don't like the lack of morals then stop reading incest.

Second many, many women/girls get pregnant at 15 or even younger. I'm not saying it's smart or right but it happens. As long as he doesn't write about it then nothing illegal has occurred. So get off that train of thought right away.

The actual story was meh. I know from your previous work that you spend zero time building anything up at all and its worn thin now. After 4 stories you should have learned something about character building or something about moments of suspense. I'm not looking for complete reality but a little make the story more relateable. That's what your stories, all of them, lack is relate-ability.

Either take your time or stop. Sad thing is you have great ideas.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Confused

Cathy or mama? Which is it? It annoyed me the way you chose to switch between her given name, and the name you've always called her growing up!!! Who does that?

Some of the imagery was okay, but it was straight to the point, no thrill.

cdnbimale50cdnbimale50almost 7 years ago
Not Bad

Not a bad story, hopefully they become a couple and she gets pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Interesting story

True desire and love are shown in this story. Mom may know and enjoy son's devotion. Good son will be patient but reveal desire. It usually works out well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Terrible writing.

Bland and obnoxious.

drve9022drve9022almost 7 years ago
hot

VERY HOT AND WILD!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
*yawn*

What a boring waste of time. This story has no redeeming qualities. The writing is tantamount to the nonsensical ravings of a sixth-grader. Now I can't wait to read your other submissions to see if you can live down to my expectations.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Aunt

It wasn’t my mum I lusted over , it was her younger sister Val - Val was 10 years younger , blonde and slim , whereas mum was dark and had put on weight over the years . She visited quite a lot and I was fascinated by her long slim legs , getting the odd flash of stocking tops and gusset as she sat down !!

Around my 17th Birthday she came to stay as they were all going out to a party nearby .. she was wearing a tight skirt and high heels that really showed off her legs and shapely bum ... they all arrived back at 2 am and went to bed , at 8 I was up and downstairs when Val came down in her housecoat and sat on the sofa opposite me - I made her a coffee and gave it to her , resuming my seat , I saw her legs were slightly apart , but couldn’t see anything

“ Could you pass me the remote Auntie Val?” I said in my sweetest voice ...

she put her cup down and leaned over to her left to grab it , her housecoat slipped open and there it was ... her Smooth CUNT on display !!... the lips looked puffy and pink and my eyes were glued to it !!!

Without looking at me , she said

“ Whoops “ and pulled it over herself...

after coffee I dashed back to my bedroom and wanked furiously all over myself

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hearing my mom having an orgasm

My mom is very attractive and when I hear her having an orgasm, I get hard and have to jackoff. I almost think she'd fuck me, but I've got to get up the nerve to make a move on her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good grief!

Wow, was this a piece of crap! My advice to you would be to wait until you pass puberty before you write again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not bad....

Doing basic math it appears that she was 15 when she dropped you.....not likely.

My major complaint is that you idolized her, worshiped her body, and wanted her greatly then......referred to her as a BITCH.......WHY?????

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I liked it UNTIL.....she went from Mom to Cathy to.....HOT BITCH???????????

Why?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Lucky SOB

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

My mom's name is Cathy and she has a wild pussy wet a nice patch. We masterbate twice a day together for years even my wife joined in from time to time i love it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

perfect

RandyashellRandyashellabout 2 years ago

to fast and perdictable

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

When I was staying at my moms house after I was married my wife went to stay at my sisters house for the weekend I had dinner with my mom and had a couple of glasses of wine before we went to sleep about an hour later she came into the living room to get something to drink I was asleep on the pull out couch and when I looked into the kitchen she was only wearing a pair of panties and I could see her ass and titles before she shut the light off I moved over to the top of the couch and was laying on my back she sat on the end of the bed and I acted like I was asleep when I felt her hands pull the bed sheets down a little bit my cock got so hard but I just didn’t move before I could move my legs she pulled the sheets off and was just looking at my cock I moved over to the end of the couch and then I felt her tongue in my ass it was just so nice that I slid my legs open so she could lick it better

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I too saw my moms pussy and wanted to fuck her I would catch her asleep and put my fingers in her real pink hairy pussy and lick them and then put my cock in her she a red like she was asleep she knew I was fucking her my cock was bigger than my dads so she got what she wanted a big cock and I got what I wanted her beautiful tight pussy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good but the best stories have an element of believability, this didnt.

MfkndragonMfkndragon11 months ago

Badly written story and the need for a first name bases between mom and son made it worse

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Mf the son was 18 when the mother was 33 if my math is right that means that the son was born when she was 15… wtf

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Fantasy.........and are we to believe that she gave birth at 13? Possible but unlikely.

Lastly, the woman that he had dreamed about became.....the "hot bitch", pretty crass.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Fucked my mom also my aunt both had real hairy cunts from belly button to hair around their assholes top butt crack we did threesome unload my sperm in both of them found out week later I knocked both of then up us three live together been 5yrs now both gave me 2 kids each all we do have threesome every day and night until sister came over both mom and aunt grabbed my sister took her clothes off her then held her down told me fuck knock her up she was screaming mom sat on her face told start licking because moving in with us my sister did end up being pregnant made sure she had 3 kids pop out of her talking about family incest us 4 love it

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