All Comments on 'Monique's Needs'

Beautiful work (you're right, stun gun was strange but..)

Please continue this story, and make others like it!

I loved this one!

It took raceplay to another level

Hope to read more of her as well as other black women and submission

OMG! This story was so damn hot! Characters, kinks, and themes were really well constructed. Thank you!

As a professional black woman and mother of black girls, I found it almost too shamefully and powerfully arousing to convey. I hope you write more along these lines, continuing and extending this story and/or writing another in a similar vein of humiliating raceplay.

Stories like this, featuring the domination, humiliation and submission of professional black women are so rare. That is understandable, yet still unfortunate. For all the shame, torment and disgrace, race, sex and power need to be persistently probed and tugged at as tightly as they have been twisted and knotted together.

Stun gun away, LizInTrouble. More blasts and bursts of bubbles. Please.

Well, Anonymous, I think that must be the nicest comment I've had for one of my stories. I'm really glad you felt it spoke to you. I must admit I was a bit worried myself, being thoroughly pale, trying to write such a character. I'd be very happy to discuss things further with you if you wanted to use the feedback form to take things offline, about where I might go next.

Lord, that was not only well written but deliciously fucked up. Please do write more in the future!!!! There's not enough stories on here that capture how much of an erotic mind fuck it is to indulge and enjoy raceplay. Fuuuuck the race shaming alone was...mghhh! I loved the build and when it got to the bathroom scene, I swear my mind went supernova. Considering one of my guilty pleasures is the indulgence of consensual humilation you did a fabulous job and I have a new fav author for sure! This was crazy hot!!!

Unusual. Daring. Had mixed feelings at first, but what an erotic thrill!

Thanks, all the best -- and above all: please share more great stories here!

This is not a RACEplay Story. RACE is not in the middle. Monique could be a blonde french lady and the storytelling wouldn't change in fact. In my opinion it's more about Submission. An amazing erotic thriller well balanced and better written. Question to author: you gotta tell us a lot. Where these masochistic Monique's needs from?. What's about day after at company with Mike?. Why not Mike pushing more Monique's masochistic limits sharing her in humilliation with colleagues, partners or even other racist employers?. You could deepen the Story down race triggers or female submission secrets, even non consensual BDSM or rape culture traumas. You got allí possibilities in your hand. So why not become this superb story in a novel by episodes?. Think about that and give a gift to your followers. Story deserves it

Echoing other comments here: this is deliciously well written and hot as hell. I don't quibble over the low-key raceplay. It's a tough line to tread between outrageously hot and offensive. I'm following to see more of your work. Good stuff.