All Comments on 'Monogamish - The Seven Year Hall Pass'

by Publius68

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ActingupActingup8 months ago

Excellent! The detail with the cushion in the massage is particularly nicely done.

GaiusPetroniusGaiusPetronius8 months ago

Your wicked sense of humor permeates your writings. I loved this: "A group of interesting-looking guys were looking on interestedly from across the pool. Interesting."

5 stars -- by rounding down.

DoctorAlanDoctorAlan8 months ago

These are both playfully erotic and often laugh out loud funny. How delightful. No angst at all; merely happiness for all.

KiwigiverKiwigiver8 months ago

Wonderful thanks - really good!!!!

Cunning_Linguist_69Cunning_Linguist_698 months ago

Well written. Thoroughly arousing throughout. Sensuous reading.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

As always, really good writing. Sex that seems real. Thanks.

jwswinglejwswingle8 months ago

More, more, more. At some point, they WILL bring in a third, but of what chromosomal composition? Will be interesting to see.

Tigerbait36Tigerbait368 months ago

5 stars for the Same Time, Next Year reference!

AlfawolfphotosAlfawolfphotos8 months ago

Great story, not sure when Hubby gets to share his research, would like to read his point of view. I enjoyed hearing her vacation plans. Thanks for sharing with us.

VashoncoupleVashoncouple17 days ago

Excellent story, wonderful writing!

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