All Comments on 'Monster Girls - Spider Noir'
by RaistlinMajere
- 9 Comments
Cynergeticover 5 years agoI really liked this story. Was a few minor grammar issues, but for me it didn't take away from a great premise. Like the name as well. Raistlin was one of my favs
EmpLucianDarkBladeover 5 years agoI have to say that was not bad at all. Well thought out. Minor grammatical errors but other then that not bad at all. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousover 5 years agoNice take on the Monster Musume fandom. I really appreciate your work and hope this isn't the last story in this setting :)
Anonymousover 5 years agoThe writing style really fit the story! Your work is a pleasure to read.
skippersdadalmost 3 years agoVery nice ,but would like to hear more about her where's she from stuff like that. But I liked it.
Anonymousover 2 years agoit was a good story to bad it over,looks like you got talent I hope you don't let it go to waste. T.B
SatyrDickalmost 2 years ago[01.08.22]
Excellent transmogrification of the Noir genre!
Love this passage:
Beneath that was a cute pale green dress that she made herself. Apparently weaving is a universal talent among Arachne. The local wives hadn't been the most accepting of her, for obvious reasons, until they started getting curious about her clothes.
-Reminded me of Edward Scissorhands.
11/10!!!!!
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