All Comments on 'Moonlight Encounter'

Only thing that proved a distraction to me and broke the suspension of disbelief was that - lake water smells bad.

I wouldn't be able to bring myself to lick a woman wet with that water regardless of how how she was.

I also was thinking about having splinters in my ass or back since they didn't have a mat or towels to rest on the wooden float. Those things tend to be rather roughly weathered.

But still - it was a fun short.

Just what the doctor would have ordered for a hot spell during the Time of Covid 19! And really well-written, too. Thank you so much. Don't forget your mask. Stay strong!

I know that Liteerotica is a site for fantasy, but nothing really happens here. This is someone's daydream which is OK, but boring. Our hero keeps talking about how beautiful "Luna" is, but what is beauty? It's highly subjective, for sure. I personally don't think blondes are particularly appealing whereas the author thinks the opposite. Swimming with waist-length hair - not very sensible. All in all not an appealing package for me. We learn almost nothing about these people except that the guy is willing to change his whole life and move to a foreign country because of a two week shack-up with an attractive, young, immature, inexperienced woman. 2* and generous at that.

A nice short fantasy. Well written as usual.

....from one of the best writers on Lit. Thank you!

This is a fun, short fantasy. It is well written and moves at a good pace.

I don't understand the criticism in these comments. It is not a dissertation on the concept of beauty, and there's nothing in the story to suggest there should be. It takes place in some unnamed lake in the stereotypical frozen Canada on a night too hot to sleep. Obviously in this fantasy land the water doesn't smell and the wood doesn't have any splinters.

C'mon people. Lighten up.

THANKS for the fun read,

Since I'm just getting over a bout with Covid-19, I'm just glad I could string enough words together to produce a submission for the Nude Day contest.

I thought I should mention though that this story takes place on Georgian Bay, a large body of water that is part of the Lake Huron, one of Canada's Great Lakes. And, its quite clean and doesn't smell, so they can kiss and make love to their heart's content.

Also, I did mention that when they're about to make love on the raft, Blair is dripping water over the padded surface -- so also there are no slivers to worry about.

I loved this story and hope that most of it is true. Keep up the great writing and I’ll keep reading! Loved it!!

There's always at least a touch of reality in everything I write, this story included. Glad you enjoyed it!

Wonderful Story. I could almost picture them out on the lake making love.

A truly enjoyable story!