by BastetShadow
You held this reader's interest and developed a feeling of belonging in your character approch. Keep the style going.
Descriptive, indepth, alluring, excellent tale thanks for the read and good luck (~_*) and Happy Halloween~
Should have been longer. It jumped right into the sex too abruptly. More build-up, more about the characters, would be good.
Beautiful descriptions. I liked your story a lot. Especially the nice surprise at the end. LOL
Good luck.
The detailed sex writing was pretty amazing.... a little quick, and many background details about the characters are missing. So, the reader has to use his imagination, but I bet you planned that. Good luck!
I loved your story. It was a bit rushed though, but the descriptive writting made up for it. I'd love to read more of these kinds of works from you.
A very good story with an interesting twist. It's not everyday that a vampire and a werewolf meet without killing each other. Looking forward to Chapter 2.
Don't you dare stop here! Where is the next chapter and the one (s) after that