by DG Hear
We don't get many true love stories. Thank you! Your work is treasured by so many!
It started off fairly problematically but ended up great, though I did not get the morale of the story! five stars of course.
takes a lot of will power and maybe one can come home for a little while. TK U MLJ LV NV
the pregnant part was not expected. but at least he got everything he wanted pretty late in life. to have a baby at 44 is not to hard if you are financially well off. a happy ending in this case. he could not ask for anything more to have two stepdaughters like those two.
The Moral Climate is Jeff met some women from that group which consist of 55% of the married women , and he married 1 woman from that group which consist of the 45% of married women, and he got a DNA test proof son...........
I liked the first three or four chapters, but the ending was soft and too sweet.
Nice try, keep writing....
I am waiting when DGH will write a wrong story? Naturaly 5 stars all chapters.
Many stories of DGH deal with the maturity of "bad" boys, as the romantic love would be the first step they become a responsible husbands and great Daddies. I think this is in the life, same to that when exprostitutes become great wives and Moms. There are so events, but these are not true for everybody..............
but this is probably your worst story since, in my opinion, you lost your way some time ago. It's a good thing you posted this in the "Romance" section. Even with your reputation, those jackals in "Loving Wives" would have eaten you alive for this story.
... a response to "I love you" of "likewise" in a Romance story. LOL Not one of your best, but still a good read as always.
JR
for DG Hear, MFG. It was a great trip that ended too soon. I wish this very fine storyteller every success in all his future endeavors, and look forward to reading more. All the best, good friend!
As always it kept me right till the end. I knew it would end good, all of yours do that's why I enjoy your stories so much. Keep up the good work.
But this one was really good and I appreciate your work, as always. I think that this one is maybe one of your best. Thank you for writing.
No complaints from Me! I loved it! Thanks for sharing this Fantastic Story with us! ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!
Why only three weeks to prepare the wedding and what about Tina's comment she was too old to be a mother,when did she change her mind?.
What a great story! Breaking it up in the chapters was fine with me, I don't care what others think. It was a wonderful story and a great ending!!!
This whole story contains several delightful comments. Here is the one I prefer: "What part of be careful didn't you understand when we had our talk? How far along are you?" That is simply genius!
Overall, a solid 5*
BJ
Oh WOW!!! I've read ( I thought) all your stories but somehow must have missed this one. I know it was posted in 2012 so it's been here a while. You should have gotten an award for this, if you didn't already. Awesome job!!! Loved the entire series... 5 stars ++++
What an incredibly boring and predictable story. He just waits for Tina for 25 years until, conveniently, her husband dies and they can be together. Oh and she still absolutely loves him and has forever. Meh. Not your best story at all. Would have been better if he had actually experienced a love besides her. Only way it could be more cliche is if he'd ended up with his female best friend.