All Comments on 'More Than Friendship Material Pt. 01'

that hollie is a saint, as is mary. i hope kevin gets to be "Big Bruce's Bitch. " frat boys can become other thug's girls. todd needs to wake up and smell the heat.

One heck of a ride...loved it...anxious to read on the rest of the story!!!!

man i loved that pt 1 was 12 pages long then i look at the other parts and most of them are only 2 pages long with the highest being 6. kind of a bummer even if i do still like the story so far

You’re a great writer, and I was enjoying this story right up until everyone started joking about Liz enjoying sex with Hollie. Liz and Hollie were both sexually assaulted, and Kevin raped them, even if only by proxy. It totally dragged me out of the story, and I stopped reading there.