All Comments on 'More Than Simply Dinner Ch. 02'

Your dialogue is very real, very loving and you always seem to be able to how to get the most out of your characters. You seem to understand the inner workings of relationships quite well, something that seems to be missing in this forum. Keep up the good work.

With some old friends! Always a treat to get a new story from you. I do hope this is the start of several more, i do like everything you have done so far.

and u do it very well. Thank you. Hope Tony's young age lasts him a while. One of my closest friends married a lady 20 year younger than himself and in a few short years she was much more his nurse than his wife. I am now a widower with my own illnesses and I often wonder if I can be selfish enough to love another woman only to make her my nurse :( Lynn

Chapter 2 didn't flow from chapter 1. In this chapter all of sudden now their living together, how did this come to be, then the ending was left up and the air.

Loved the story.