by jackredd
Chapter 1 was a hell of a start can't wait to see what 2 is like!
Usually it's the girl who has the doubts after crossing the line. Can't wait for the next of many chapters (I hope). More......please and thank you!
Sound like the beginings of a good series, although, it was a little short.
I hope that he isn't such a tight ass that it doesn't keep him from finding her and giving her what she wants.
A very well-crafted story which, unlike many of the 'quick-jerk' authors who wrap their tales in a very flimsy plot, told a story, and beautifully. Thank you.
This is just the first chapter! Relax and ease into it.
The end product is going to be 7 chapters long, at around 57 print pages total.
It was nicely written but left me dissatisfied. More a very sad touch romance than an incest story without the happy ending. I had such high hopes when I started it but still was a good read just not to my taste. If you are looking for an incest happy ending or even a beginning look elsewhere.
My younger sister would come to my room almost every morning to play with and jack off my big morning throbbing erection!