All Comments on 'Moth to the Flame'

This could really become something amazing. Maybe student dominating teacher?

I have really been getting into Girl Girl action. I guess I fantasize about Mrs K. having it off with another woman. I'd like too see this story include.....some anal stimulation....hehe

Smooth build up. Not too much of "action" (which is a good thing - in fact great!).

Kept me interested an all WET till the very end.

Great story but you might want to look into this as a series. If you do I would build up the characters a little more and go more with these fun and erotic games but keep in the love and partnership that you showed a little of at the end.

It was a nice story, but lacked depth. I would enjoy seeing this story go further if you could add some depth & excitement. Also consider building up the characters & adding some background for them. I'll add to what a past reviewer stated & say that this story could get interesting if Maggie was simply allowing her teacher to be comfortable until she let her guard down, then Maggie lets her dominantion plans for her teacher unfold. I agree that the love should remain!

I think it was a great story and it was hot. I would love if it were a series! good job with this one!

This was a great read. I love the whole concept of student seducing her teacher. Please continue this story. I can't get enough of it. I really want to see their relationship blossom.

Loved this story and the pace. Hope to see you continue with these characters.

That was played out very well and I really enjoyed it. Sequal? :)

I LOVE This Can You Please Continue This Story

This story was a well paced, relatively innocent seduction. I loved the variety and spontaneity. You could easily take these two characters and launch a whole series of chapters (please take this comment as blatant encouragement, ok?). Thanks for sharing your talent!

... but needs a second part, I think. No need to drag it on to a whole story, but perhaps one more with a more definite conclusion.

I enjoyed the story but would suggest it would have been better if we had gotten into Megan's head more. An exploration of her motivations, whether innocent, malevolent, fetish-driven, or something else, would have added to the tale. It is, after all, a sex story and I feel that you did not take advantage of the opportunity to write about someone's sexual desires, which can only add to such a story. I still don't know what Megan is all about.

I hope this does not come across as too critical; I truly enjoyed the story. It just seemed to me that there was a missed opportunity here to make it even better.

Keep up the good work.

Loved it!

I love this story, and I love your work!

... Maggie is, without a doubt, trouble, but in a most delightful way. These two ladies could wind up being very good for each other.

5 Stars, and thanks again.

This was the first time I read this one, and I regret it taking me so long to get to.

So what have I learned today? I've learned that the word 'Trouble' starts with a capital 'M' and not 'T' as I've thought all my life. A tip to teachers: see Maggie and run like hell!

Maggie is the definition of naughty sexiness. That was such an enjoyable read. Mmm.

great writing skills, and wonderful story. this was a real turn on. thank you.

Very good writing style, good characters bring the story to life but this needs a sequel for sure. Keep up the good work & this story.

I love the freedom and inhibitions of Megan, her abilities to go without panties anywhere.

Soooo sexy!

Another great story like the cam girl. Megan is a fantastic creation thanks so much. Will read more of your one offs