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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 5 years ago
"Revelled in my captive treatment"

During our teasing phase my mother so wanted me to do that as it would not be her fault. Years after we started making love she admitted she wanted me to force her and get our first time over with so she'd have no guilt.

"I do have to spank my boy" is great.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 5 years ago
"Revelled in my captive treatment"

During our teasing phase my mother so wanted me to do that as it would not be her fault. Years after we started making love she admitted she wanted me to force her and get our first time over with so she'd have no guilt.

"I do have to spank my boy" is great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Do NOT write conversations as one paragraph

The general rule is that when the character speaking changes, start a new paragraph.

cookie404cookie404almost 5 years ago
The dinky doo

Once was fine. Numerous was one too many. Childish.

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