All Comments on 'Mother Comes to Stay Ch. 03'

I hope these three carry on with more adventures. Deb, in particular, needs a good DP with her mum-in-law up her arse hard and nasty!

Just need to proofread a bit more. Darren/Simon?

Damn it, you're right, Mr Anon. That's what comes of writing two series at the same time. And to think I went through it several times looking for mistakes, and still didn't spot that.

I must roundly congratulate you.Do you have any plans for a mom son story,when they both are 20 years older? Stockings in the equation would be wonderful.Keep writing this stuff .You are brilliant.

Hi Otazel:

I just started reading this, then I had to finish all three chapters. It may not be a 100, but it is a lot more than 75!

It is a great story, and just different enough to be super interesting. I really enjoyed the read, and you did a greaty job with the writing of it.

Thank you very much,

Bill

[Big Bad Bill of ES & SOL]

his wife was a slut before he married her then his mother - his wife's lover - comes to stay - has sex with him then basically gives him an ultimatum - me and your wife are lovers deal with it or fuck off. Poor schmuck - just shows you what a pair of Fuck, Slut Whores they really are and mommy is going to rule the roost from now on...

Suggest a story about Jenny's seduction of Debbie and their continuing relationship over the years.

who is Simon?

To rightbank.

Simon is a pseudonym for that well known person who manages somehow to get into a lot of stories. His real name is Mr Typo. Sorry about that.

It's a while ago now, but I think that when I wrote this story I was also writing one with a Simon as a main character, and I got confused. Or at least that's my story and I'm sticking to it. Hope it didn't spoil your enjoyment too much.

Meant to make it 5 star but miss hit :(

I realise you wrote this series a while ago - but another episode would be great! Any chance?

I only read the Incest/Taboo stories on these sites and I was doing all right with what you had written until I got to this story. You mentioned anal in the previous story to this one, but you just mentioned it. Then you had to go and introduce anal into this story and that ruined it for me. What a turn off. I stopped reading right then and removed your name and submissions from the list I keep of authors in order to check back with periodically to see if they've written anything new. Like I said, what a waste.

Nice of Simon to join in for a paragraph!

turned into a cuckhold just like Jenny's husband. Yuk!!