All Comments on 'Mother of Necessity Ch. 01'

Needs must when the Devil vomits in your cap !!

Can't beat a good Mum. Put the family first.

Looking forward to the next episode

I liked the casual friends-with-benefits approach to her sex life. It seemed pretty realistic for her situation. I had to wonder at the disarray in the house and why she wasn't able to get her sons to do more to help out. The dialogue was excellent.

What a great first chapter. In just two short pages, you've got me desperate to find out what's going to happen next, and it's all because of your brilliantly nuanced characterization and dialogue. Even without any actual porny type stuff happening quite yet, this is easily a 5 star chapter. I'm looking forward to reading your other work while I wait for the next installment!

On a side note, is Tertiary Existence based on anything real?

ErrantZebra, I based Tertiary Existence on elements from The Sims and Second Life, with a whole lot of wishful thinking :) Thanks for the comment!

I love the start of this story. Five stars. Looking forwarding to the second chapter. As I haven't read any of your stories before, I'm also looking forward to reading your other stuff as well. I really like your writing style.

Capri are pants, Camisoles are tops. Both seem redundant to me.

You get paid for mentioning Corporate names and products? I hope you get paid well and pay Literotica.com the standard fee. There are no free plugs.

The story. Yes, the story. Light, quick, airy. Even a sex scene. Dang. Blinked and missed it.

The Basic Are Down! Cliff as Faceless Donor! Story is Beginning! Can't Wait!

Perfect intoductory chapter!

Reading on with anticipation!

Interesting set up. I’m looking forward to see what happens.

I'd like to hear about the threesome with her sister. My wife won't share me with her sister.

Tantalizing build-up. Loving the “FWB” indication between Cliff and Melinda that adds an erotic tone to Cliff’s idea. Now, I’m off to chapter 2