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All Comments on 'Mother of the Swarm'

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mBrowmBrowover 14 years ago
Bizarre!

Nicely done, surprising twist!

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenover 14 years ago
Interesting and...

gory as hell. Very nicely done. Good luck with the contest!

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Ewww

Gross and weird and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Turnabout is fair prey.

Often it's women victimized in these horror tales, so it's a nice change of pace for the male to suffer an unfortunate fate.

Blackthorn1Blackthorn1over 10 years ago
Bugs....

Bleh.... This story makes my skin crawl.... Good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Brilliant plot twist!

I was expecting a classic vampire story, and was pleasantly surprised by something quite original.

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