All Comments on 'Mother's Boyfriend'

Oh oh ...lured into netherworld of Freudian Symbolism by my industrial caffeine craving . Big Ashson fan always but this lurid tale of Espresso Love ( great Dire Straits song ) really hit home. The cad took her virginity? He owes her bagels loaded with lox and platinum Starbucks card for this transgression.

Full marks ( and favorited ) *****

Loved it all, the plot, the characters and description of a great First Time.

Thank you for your craftmanship

Not realistic or believable, but well written, extended, and sexy. Chapter Two

Super gorgeous, excellent piece, i loved each and every word of it, enjoyed so much, thank you very much

it lacked detail, but I liked it.