All Comments on 'Mother's Day Gift'

Part 2?

"It's been a !ong time since you've done that." So many sons long to hear those words . So many mothers long to utter those words.

This is a great story that I feel like you can expand into at least one more chapter.

I hope we will see more of their adventure? 5 stars

Please continue this story when she’s pregnant and lactating.

More plenty more. Have them continue

Whoever it is and whatever it is for. Though I won't rate it 1. I respect your effort but not your style.

Don't they have to do it again, just for being sure?

Loved the story! However, I think that it needs a followup chapter as mom didn't get pregnant right away and they needed to try a few more times to stick a baby in her belly. Five stars and a favorite point!

Good story looking forward to part 2.

More! This story definitely needs more chapters!

Shaved pussy always a turn off, especially on a mature woman.

Oh yes! More baby batter is needed just to be sure.

Well paced, and really erotic. Well written, also, aside from a few typos. It could have more chapters, but it could also be a stand alone story where the reader continues it in his or her imagination.

Also, I wonder what women think of the story.

Bravo!

You need to write a ch 2.

The only thing that disappointed me was not seeing Chp. 1 in the title

He needs to fuck mom until she has a baby bump develop. Why stop with one baby. They can have several love children

Could have given husband options but just fucked behind his back. What a slut!

Really enjoyed this story! I really enjoy mother son stories with love and respect! The sexual parts were really well written. Would be nice to see this carried on at home(after all mom didn't get pregnant the first time) right?

Of all the stories Iv'e read, why do all the woman have DD or larger boobs?. This is not real. Was a good read, but think about it. Thanks

...to your story because I first fucked my son in the back of our family minivan in a parking lot. We had flirted for a year and he was home from his second year at university. It was dark and the lot was large, so we parked in a private spot. We knew exactly why we were there, and he fucked me three times within an hour. It was the start of a glorious, erotic, and fulfilling relationship that lasted three years, until he got married and moved away. My opportunities to fuck my precious boy are now very infrequent, but we have found ways to get the privacy we need. I LOVED your story.

Minul on ka täna koos emaga emadepäeva tähistada.Sõitsin selleks kauge maa tagant koju.Mina ihaldan noorest east oma ema ja tahaks täna temaga voodi minna.Õhtul võtame veidi veini ja siis peab see asi juhtuma,ma nii loodan.Olen 25.aastane ja ema on minust 30.aastat vanem.Tõin talle palju lilli,siis ta muutub nii härdaks. No nii hiljem kuuleme kuidas minul läks.

I’m sure the Mother and son would like to continue until there is no doubt that the mother is pregnant . After the baby is born maybe a sibling would be in order so the first child doesn’t have to grow up alone . Who knows it could be a Mo5her# day tradition . It is just a suggestion as I would like this story to continue . Well done .

It is funny, because I actually have G boobs, and I am small, so I relate to women like this. Maybe the women you are seeing are fake, but there are still some who aren't fake!

Overall a great story and it was an easy read

Why is it that in most stories the female lead always has a bare' shaved cunt?

A real dinner date, hotels, fucking.. dresses hosiery heels..

of a weekend I had with my high school girlfriend's Mom the week after my graduation

I would say you are about 1/4 done about the same size it is now.

Are the best. Wouldn't want to go down on a jungle, unless that's your thing. Atleast trim it regularly.

Great story, perfect for Mothers Day. Mom gave her son the hottest gift of all, a great shot of his Mom's pussy. The story does need additional chapters. I agree hotel fucking, home fucking needs to be explored and enjoyed. Keep up the great work. Get a proof reader to eliminate the typos.

, You asked for constructive feedback? Well it's been three days and you haven't posted part two yet! Lol . Great story! Very sexy and Hot! Would be nice to see mother and son develop a deeper,stronger relationship.

Not demanding, just asking. Thanks.

Peace.

That was a hell of a story, I'm wondering where it will end. How long will take for her to get pregnant? So many more questions to ask.

Hot story. Marked as favourite story and rated 5*.

I liked first part of the story where son making breakfast for mom to the point where mom son reaches in parking. And mom opens up about her past and asks son for favour. Most lovely part of the story with well build up.

Second part is as usual a hardcore sex which you find in every porn story. Mom son fucking each other in car.

Can I give this 10 stars? 15? Hurry up with part 2, PLEASE!

A stay at home mother who has an 18 year old son? LMFAO! Was this written in the 1950s? What does this lazy woman do with her life besides sponge off her husband? Also, why need her son to be a "sperm donor?" It would make better sense to hook up with some other dude. The writing was good, however.

this one deserves a second chapter

I was giving it five stars but accidentally press 1 star. Sorry. Great story..

Awesome. I want a second chapter

"No, this would forever change our relationship," I rebutted.

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"It wouldn't though. I'm asking you to do me a favor. I need you, Andrew. I need help. You want to be a good son; well, this is what I need you to do."

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Of course it's going to change their relationship. No matter if he never tells anyone about this, he's going to know he's the father of his sibling. More importantly, once she's fucked him does she really think that when she's pregnant he's going to think, "Well, I've done my duty. I've helped Mom. We'll never fuck again." Hell no. He's gonna want to fuck her again and again and again. That's the gist of the calls for a sequel.

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Hell, if all she wanted was for him to get her pregnant, the BJ wasn't really necessary. They didn't really need to get completely naked. If all she wanted as to get knocked up was to remove their pants get him hard, and the fuck. The end. Nah, the way you wrote is she wanted to fuck him and probably wants to go on fucking him.

But it's really just another very fast skim read fuck story. I give most of those 3 stars, so this one was better. It probably didn't deserve a 5.

This is one of the better written stories I've read on this site. I get so tired of stumbling through bad grammar, misspelled words, incorrect words used etc. that this was a breath of fresh air. We all know that this isn't the end of their story so please write another chapter.

Bare pussy is a huge turn off for me. Why would a woman want her pussy to look like a little kid??? OK I get it, the wimps of today who think they are men get intimidated by a real woman pussy. WIMPS!

This story should be in the Loving Wives category. She's a cheating whore that needs to be caught and dumped to the curb! penniless. I hate cheaters, they are scum...

I almost didn't read the whole story. I am so uninterested in stories with women with such big breasts. And to top it off, IN THE CAR???? If she had this planned out, to include dinner, at least have a hotel/motel room. Other than that it was a fairly good read.

Got me hot and wishing I were in the car with his open minded mom.

Do a second part please

I'm going to add my "voice" in wishing there was a sequel to this one. Incredibly hot and sexy, needs a followup. Perhaps where they make it a regular thing or dad dies or somehow it goes beyond just one day in the backseat of their vehicle. Regardless it's a 5* story.

I wanted to know wjathappen when they got back home.Did they make out some more or where did they go for being late getting home

Good Story, instead of extending till evening, you could have added that they continued even after, or as some other comments mentioned, doing in home, then confirming the pregnancy and doing more.

Oh hell! I could just do with some of that right now and no doubt later toooo! Luv'd the story and will read it again. jildijow@outlook.com

Outstanding. True love in the back seat.

Obviously they are gonna have to Do It a few more times to make sure.

And may I say how nice it is to see an author who knows the difference between "complement" and "compliment"

Very good story but you should have continued with more they need to have more sex to make sure she is pregnant and then with her having his child!!! Gave it 5 stars

Awesome story but you needed to finish till she get pregnant gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I gave it 5 but would she start by giving him a blowjob when getting pregnant was the aim

Interesting how most commenters identify with the horny boy only. That tells you something. Very few identify with the man, the husband, who has been done so wrong. It would be a fitting ending if some gang showed up and violently raped both of these cheating cunts, leaving him impotent and her unable to have children or pleasurable sex at all.

That was hot! I always wanted my widowed mother to do something like that with me and teach me what I needed to know. I often fantasized that she would take me to a secluded spot and show me her pussy and make a man out of me. BTW, a lot of moms have DD breasts and loads of pubic hair. I never knew my mom to shave her pussy.

fucking lovely, mother son lovers mother gets pregnant I love it

loved it mum loved it son loved it forget dad mum son lovers pregnant 4 babies

It seems it is, ahem..."Anonymous's" first time reading erotic stories, wanting people to come and gang rape the pair for their cheating ways. For god's sake, it's a mother son story, chances are good that a dad is getting cheated on. Seems a bit much to let quite that much anger get to ya, over a story no less, but whatever. All in all it was a good story, seemed a bit rushed, but otherwise I enjoyed it, no glaring errors, other than that he teased her clit with his clit, but I at least new what was meant. Well done.

i fully agree with funtime581! That guy's comment came from way out past left field! WTF? I'm kinda surprised Literotica let it pass through. I abhor censorship, though, and kinda wonder why the compliments are held up for a few hours anyway, especially now that that cocksucker's comment got through! Here's a thought, dude: if you know going in that the father is still in the picture: skip the story so we aren't subject to your hostile incivility. Your comment was a LOT MORE than rude!

If you ask me, this story just needed one more page as a denouement. To end a story at the height of the drama is too abrupt. Just throw us a bone as to their future together.

one more thing: those that complain that the dad is so wronged forget that he wouldn't be a dad at all without his wife resorting to a trusted friend and now turns to her son for another child. It doesn't seem wrong to me to make a man happy and give him a family. You want to call her a whore??? Walk a mile in her shoes- you might retract that foul of a slam!

Quite retarded story. Nearly 95% of this garbage is just describing the mechanics of the sexual activity instead of trying to develop the story and focusing on the push & pull of incest erotica. Even the sexual activity is described in such lame, non-erotic ways using short sentences, felt like reading some instructions manual. Simply skimped through page 3 as there was nothing but the same pile of shit.

Very imaginative plot to get to eager mother/son incest. Felt real. I liked it a lot!

I voted 5 you deserve a 10. Every son should show mom love. you have talent.

So, she has deceived her husband all these years, and deceived both her sons too. Now, instead of going back to her "friend" to impregnate her again, and keep her long held secret, she comes to her youngest son and lays all that burden on him. Why? Because she wants him, that's why, and even has to continue to talk him into it after he first refuses. She lies to him, and seduces him. This is a very fucked up woman, as this poor will most likely find out. She doesn't care much about him, to do something like this. Fucked up.

The story is probably worth a three, but i gave it a five to balance some of the really negative comments.

Why three?

Too fast. Too little character development. Ended without satisfying the reader's curiosity. Did she get pregnant?How did their relationship change?

Common Flaws with short stories, but that is why short stories can be hard to write.

All in all, not a bad story.

Kudos to the author for putting his work out for us to enjoy, knowing the anonymous trolls would find him.