by VirtuallyYours1
It gets you started, but then you know it’s already over. Disappointed!
I like the premise...but it's going nowhere...where is the progression?
So the story is good and i can see how its ramping up but one suggestion. Change the title as there is already a multi series work by the same name by dick spanker maybe change it to something like Mothers Caress. Just a suggestion
The pace is perfect. The buildup is driving me mad, in a good way, of course. Naked Karen in this installment, along with the carpal-tunnel (sp?) syndrome she seems to be developing...wow, there are several ways you can go from here. I'm not going to reveal my preference, or my second preference, so, VirtuallyYours1, you tell me. Just do it soon!
Keep up the reluctance on the mothers part, it makes your story believable.