All Comments on 'Mother's Helping Hand Ch. 04'

by VirtuallyYours1

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 5 years ago

Love this series! Five stars and a favorite point!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Way too short

It gets you started, but then you know it’s already over. Disappointed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
potential

I like the premise...but it's going nowhere...where is the progression?

dwr0242dwr0242over 5 years ago
great!

Love the stories. Just keep going as you are!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Love it

So the story is good and i can see how its ramping up but one suggestion. Change the title as there is already a multi series work by the same name by dick spanker maybe change it to something like Mothers Caress. Just a suggestion

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great

Really love the slow building of this story, great stuff, thank you !

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Still the best series ever!

The pace is perfect. The buildup is driving me mad, in a good way, of course. Naked Karen in this installment, along with the carpal-tunnel (sp?) syndrome she seems to be developing...wow, there are several ways you can go from here. I'm not going to reveal my preference, or my second preference, so, VirtuallyYours1, you tell me. Just do it soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
5 stars

Keep up the reluctance on the mothers part, it makes your story believable.

chytownchytownover 5 years ago
Chapter 04 Good Read***

Thanks.

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