All Comments on 'Mother's Stallion'

Welcome back! Keep it up!

Holy shit, klrxo's back! I gotta say, you're one of the few authors whose stories I keep coming back to. I hope this is just the first of more to come!

The family is white, but speaks like freed black slaves? "You gon et me up?" For that era, I'd expect a better vocabulary and better grammar. And speaking of vocabulary, I don't think terms like "Brick Shithouse" and "Lay Pipe" existed yet, in 1889. Also not sure that prairie moms shaved their legs back in 1889. I enjoyed the story, as I enjoy most of your stories, but maybe you can explain why you set this for 1889 and not some year that might have better accommodated the story, like post WW2?

Absolutely love your stuff! This one was a little different but still turned me on. Can't wait for more! Welcome back! IM me please!

back and rock the world dammm good

Hope to see more. Love your work!

great to see you back writing. You remain an inspiration.

3/5

I'm sorry to say this story is not one of your better ones...I guess you spoiled us with stories like ''Mom's 5th Wheel Lovin'' and ''Mom's Roommate''.

Please try posting more often, it's been too long since your last story.

Hope this means there is more coming from you. Long ago, you said you were nearly done with BSTC and we still haven't seen it. Also, wish the husband wasn't okay with this in this story, not the same eroticism you usually use regarding husbands. Not as big a deal to screw in Dad's bed if he's okay with it. Makes the deed less wicked. And last, Literotica took down your story "Santa Mom" for whatever reason. As someone who likes to reread your stories, I hope you repost it soon.

A good solid storyline and a nicely written story.

This story needs another chaper or two to tell the rest of the story.

I'm sure that the young stud still had to do his work around the farm but with his mama wanting him to make her belly swell up with his child, she would make sure he had plenty of time to fill her cunt with his spunk and give her the baby she wants.

They have to find a way to keep dad away for a while, so when he comes back home her belly is already showing she is pregnant with her son's baby.

Thanks for the read.

One smoking ass story welcome back. Thanks for sharing.

I've never read a story in this setting. Maybe it's me, but you really nailed the southern voice. I agree that the story might have worked better with everything on the sly, perhaps with the mom as a southern belle type. The country setting makes me think of another possible story, one set at a fair. Son gets a piece of Mom's pie?

Should have mentioned this in the last post, slipped my mind. Enough about BSTC! Even incomplete it blows everything else to shreds.

You are the best author on the site in my opinion and I hope this is the start of another posting binge for you! As always I would love to see another pregnant mom story, but I love everything you write.

Welcome back, I have missed you and your great stories!! Thanks for another great read!! I realize I have no right to ask, or beg, but is there any chance that you might add a chapter or two to "Mom's Roommate"?

Thanks for the read. It was a little different venue for you but I still enjoy the way you tell a story. Welcome back. I hope that it doesn't take as long for you to post some more. Thanks again.

It has been a long, cold year and a half without your fantastic stories! Please keep writing!

excellent story like always missed your writing glad to have you back. hope there is more to this story. would also like to see you finish BSTC if possible really missed your writing keep them coming please.

First things first: I'm disappointed at having to be one of only a couple negative voices commenting on this story. I've thoroughly enjoyed quite a few of this author's tales, over the last few years - "Drive-In Mom", "Valentine Mom", "My Christmas Gift" - to list only a few. However, when a story doesn't work, the sheer fact that it manages to get a mom into bed with her son is not - in and of itself - sufficient grounds to post a 'rave review' for it.

And this story simply does not work. The actions of the "adult" characters (Mary and her husband, Walter) are entirely out of context for the culture of 1898. The author makes use of therms ("pussy", "laying pipe", "doin' the nasty" - to list a few) that were not used as sexual referents in 1898. Even the geographical setting is incorrect, as the "Old South" (Maryland, Virginia and West Virginia, the Carolinas, and Georgia) did not have land classed as "prairie".

Further, though certain text-references (Will blushing red, or having a purple cock-head) indicate that the family is white (as neither condition can easily be seen in a dark-skinned person), the dialog holds very little trace of any "Old South" accent or dialect. The single letter "a" is used where " o' " should appear as a contraction for the word, "of". The word, "libel" (untruthful, defamatory statements appearing in print, as opposed to spoken only - or slander) is used in place of the word, "liable".

The author is capable of producing far better stories, as has been demonstrated by much of his/her past submissions. Sadly, this story cannot be classed as being among his/her best work.

Not my favorite story of yours, but "not my favorite of klrxo" still means one of my favorites on the site!

It's been a long year without your stories. Glad to see you back!

Very hot! Dying for a part 2. I love all your stories and glad to see more from you!

Great story keep them coming!

Welcome back, you've been missed.

I've been waiting and checking your submission page periodically hoping for some new, crazy hot stories with lust filled mother/son action. Looking forward to reading this! Haven't read it yet, but given your track record, I already know it is going to be so fucking good. Thanxxx. - FreshlyDirty

definately not into it at all. ive loved just about everything youve written up till this one but lines like this : "Well sweatpea...your peter ain't even started lickin your Momma's womb yet. Once you slip inside and we start to rockin...you gon see just how good pleasure can get." totally ruin this one. please come back to the present day, youre one of the best on literotica IMHO!

I picture a young Marty McFly and that MILF schoolteacher Clara from Back to the Future III

The minute I saw klrxo as the poster I just knew it was going to be fucking good - it was! My favourite author on this site. Is there going to be a second chapter? I hope so!

I am a big fan of ur stories. But unfortunately, this story is not upto your other stories like Making State Champion, Boobs and Bonors, 5th Wheel loving etc.

I hope you will give us similar high class stories. Thanks :-)

What happened to the story "Santa Mom"? Its gone.

It's a period piece. It's lovely as a mother/son fantasy. The country phrases and references are funny, and still sexy. Lots of good dialog is always important. And this tongue-in-cheek dialog is as hot and sexy as all of KLRXO's previous stories. I think some people are taking the dialog a little too seriously, and should be more respectful of a wonderful and prolific author here on Literotica. So the dialog was not to your taste. Be respectful, and then move on. I thought it was wonderful as always.

Thank you for another wonderful story!

I'm happy to see a new story from you. You are good, thanks.

What ever happened to Santa Mom though?

Hopefully a sequel is in the works?

Magnififcent, as usual. You're sorely missed, we all need some more from you!

As with all other klrxo stories, I loved this one. A big titted mom fucking her big cocked son. What's not to love?

I love all your stories and have reread them many times, especially this one. I think this one needs to keep going. Maybe the aunt could show up? I love the way you right you charecters. I also like that you stay from the cliché set up. You know, mom/son finds the other one masterbating, or mom hasn't had a man in 15 years, etc. Hope to keep seeing you submit stories.

When we used to live on the farm I never heard of this custom but maybe it's because we moved from the farm when I was 12 yrs old..... It is a hot story and sure could use some more chapters to it....

Would love to see more of this story, I know you don't write much anymore but please carry this one on!

(8/1/2021)

Well, ah neva red anathin like this bufah on this interweb thing. Twas very different. Auh liked it a lot. Mama wanted ta show her baby boy how to lay pipe an show hima good time taboot. He had a real understaden Pa to. Maybe his Pa got lucky a helpen his uncle build that barn, cause I’m sure his aunt May hadn seen Pa since the carny last summa and cuzen Rosey sure took a shine ta Pa when she saw him dippen in the big pond last year. But yah no, it seems her boy was a bit old fer not havn dipped his pecker yet. Marysue was sixteen when she got knocked up at the old Williams place. I remember how her little brotha walked around fer weeks with that shit eatn grin. As ah said ah liked this a lot.

Now I feel I should be commenting on the comment below. I give both stories 5 stars. I hope they decide to get an account and start submitting.

To the illiterate moron below........

Learn how to read and write before you comment next time......fucking cringe fest.

This mrdata9770 dude is making my skin crawl, i swear to god! So damn repulsive!

Hey dumbass, no one is impressed by your retarded accent and thinks you are special because of it. The fact that you are spouting absolute nonsense in your comment while misspelling every word. None of your words make any sense you dumb retarded jamaican fuck! I don't know who the fuck dropped you on your head when you were a baby, but stay the fuck off the "interweb ting".

One of the hottest stuff on lit from one of the most gifted authors....kudos....keep posting....

Outstanding. Seriously hot story. Enjoyed reading it. Additional chapters would be welcomed. Sex education in HS can never replace face to face female or male attention.