All Comments on 'Mother's Toy'

For fuck's sake. Something you should learn when you're about four years old.

Just stop!!!

You writing is so raw and unequivocal. Nice work.

I hope you write the sequel to this!

Something you should have learnt before you attempt to correct others.

So easy to remember.

If you want to abbreviate 'you are' then it's you're. As in you're shit at grammar!

But if you need something like 'Can I borrow your car please?' then it's your.

thank you for the story i love being dominated by mature women

You start the story in past tense and for some reason you change quite quickly to present tense for no reason. 1☆