All Comments on 'Moving'

just the right amount of back story (no pun intended) and great detail.. can't wait for chapter 2!

Well written. The character development was good, kept my interest to keep reading, I wanted to find out what they experienced. Well, it was very sexy and I enjoyed their tryst very much!

22 inches is virtually impossible for a waistline. unless you take out some bones.

This is my first story what do you think? chapter 2 is on its way (...eventually). Thanks for the feedback, it is appreciated. Does anyone have any helpful suggestions?

next chapter?!!!!

I was so into the story, that I was stroking my own throbbing cock as if in a trance I was in my own mind at that time fucking her ass, it was not till I shot my own load that I can back to reality. Truley wonderfull.