All Comments on 'Moving Closer and Closer Ch. 04'

by petskunk

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
nofish1100nofish1100almost 7 years ago
Kudos

Excelling story. Particularly liked the six flags trip.keep writing. I'm waiting on my first publication to be approved. Look for it, called"teach me" should be out in a few days.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please do not include her friends. You'll be straying from the daddy daughter relationship.

Unless you want the daughter going to the other daddies of her friends. It's just too much. Let them have their own sex together only. No one else. Anyone else would be overkill. They are not needed.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userpetskunk@petskunk
I write my stories for my enjoyment. Some are "memories" and some are complete fantasies. Being ego driven though, I like to read comments and see voting results. It always amazes me that I can have 50k views and only a couple hundred votes. Can't people take the time to t...