by Ashson
If only things like this could happen in real life... Sigh... Lament... Sigh...
This is the first of your stories that I've read. I'm not sure how I got here, but I'm glad I clicked on whatever link did bring me here.
I really enjoyed the interaction between Mike and Deirdre. I normally despise people whose comments include "write more" or "need to see more of this story" but I have to say that I'd enjoy reading more about them. Not necessarily an entire series, but another glimpse of them, somewhere down the line.
This is one of the few stories here that I've given a rating of 5 to, and I think it deserves each of those five stars. I'm going to go read it again and check out your other works now.