by betweenthesheets
I wasn't sure when you started out on this one, but it grew and turned into a really nice romantic story. Thanks
so did the girls repeat the next season?did teagan and taylor sneak a 3way in on him just so taylor can know what she is waiting for?
Thanks for sharing this great series with your readers. 5 star vote.
Good story in general but so many possibilities were missed. Not sure I buy a
"player" in his late 20's settling for a teen ager when so many options existed
Very well written, with great interaction between the characters. Sounds like a family you want to be a part of.
Loved it.
just one thing though and it has frustrated me over many stories not just yours, you drag or dragged someone all over town not drug them :)
Shocked a player in his mid 20's calmed down? Some of you are so shallow. This is an amazing love story. This story is very believable. Real life isn't like you chumps have been lead to believe by your limited experience drawn from watching pornos. Great story, good job.
At the beginning I really thought Jake would end up with Sam. Figured Teagan was just a fling. Was pleasantly suprised to see him end up with Teagan at the end. Great story! 5 stars!
What a story, you have done well. A real tear jerker at times I was so happy for them both.
Thank you so much
Somebody who's as good a writer as you are should learn how to spell homonyms. "Peeked" vs. "Peaked" vs. "Piqued." "Cords" vs. "chords." A wonderful story; and yes, I understand perfectly how a 26-yr-old could fall for an 18/19 y.o. with long, athletic legs, perfect skin, and no panties. (What I don't understand is how they could do so much messin' around while she was still in h.s. without his getting busted!) 5*
Please find an editor. Arraignment- when someone is indicted in court, vial- a small tube usually holding blood, alter- to change something.
Pay no attention to those wanting a three-way involving the little sister.