All Comments on 'Mr. Basketball Ch. 08'

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aarod9988aarod9988over 10 years ago
Thanks

Thanks. Great story.

AJPhynnAJPhynnover 10 years ago
Great Story

I wasn't sure when you started out on this one, but it grew and turned into a really nice romantic story. Thanks

redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

so did the girls repeat the next season?did teagan and taylor sneak a 3way in on him just so taylor can know what she is waiting for?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well written tale

Thanks for sharing this great series with your readers. 5 star vote.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awsome

So does jake sleep with Taylor

Tittyluver69Tittyluver69over 10 years ago
Little Disappointing

Good story in general but so many possibilities were missed. Not sure I buy a

"player" in his late 20's settling for a teen ager when so many options existed

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Very well written, with great interaction between the characters. Sounds like a family you want to be a part of.

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
beautiful

Loved it.

just one thing though and it has frustrated me over many stories not just yours, you drag or dragged someone all over town not drug them :)

Dobhran83Dobhran83over 10 years ago
To those disappointed.

Shocked a player in his mid 20's calmed down? Some of you are so shallow. This is an amazing love story. This story is very believable. Real life isn't like you chumps have been lead to believe by your limited experience drawn from watching pornos. Great story, good job.

nobodyneedstoknownobodyneedstoknowover 9 years ago
Wow!

At the beginning I really thought Jake would end up with Sam. Figured Teagan was just a fling. Was pleasantly suprised to see him end up with Teagan at the end. Great story! 5 stars!

Turtle1952Turtle1952almost 8 years ago
Loved it, loved it

What a story, you have done well. A real tear jerker at times I was so happy for them both.

Thank you so much

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story, again; but, once again . . .

Somebody who's as good a writer as you are should learn how to spell homonyms. "Peeked" vs. "Peaked" vs. "Piqued." "Cords" vs. "chords." A wonderful story; and yes, I understand perfectly how a 26-yr-old could fall for an 18/19 y.o. with long, athletic legs, perfect skin, and no panties. (What I don't understand is how they could do so much messin' around while she was still in h.s. without his getting busted!) 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

Please find an editor. Arraignment- when someone is indicted in court, vial- a small tube usually holding blood, alter- to change something.

Pay no attention to those wanting a three-way involving the little sister.

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