All Comments on 'Mr. Basketball Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Jake" You know what I like about those high school girls? I keep getting older, they stay the same age." Sorry lost me with this turn but good tale up to this point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Alternate ending

Hey betweenthesheets I really liked this series and enjoyed it! Is it possible to make an alternate ending where Teagan does not die. Thanks! Really hope you can do so

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Define "quipped"

Of the many, many times you've used this word, only a small handful of uses have been correct:

quip

kwip/

noun

1.

a witty remark.

synonyms: joke, witty remark, witticism, jest, pun, bon mot, sally, pleasantry; More

archaic

a verbal equivocation.

verb

verb: quip; 3rd person present: quips; past tense: quipped; past participle: quipped; gerund or present participle: quipping

1.

make a witty remark.

"“Flattery will get you nowhere,” she quipped"

synonyms: joke, jest, pun, sally; informalwisecrack

"“I think he got the point,” quipped Sean"

jott50jott50almost 9 years ago
i love this series

I saw this comming with taylor way back when he had his knee sugery but I diddnt know how you were going to handle it. You kind of lost me for a while when you skipped into the future after the accident though. I thought that I might have skipped a chapter. "Its all good " now though. I do think that you should not have put the southern twang in there though.

shades1ashades1aalmost 9 years ago
Creepy

I was trying to get by it, but these new chapters are just a little too creepy for my taste.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Ugh HORRIBLE accent dialogue

I've never heard a single person from Texas sound remotely like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Age difference?

He was in his mid twenties when he dated a high schooler. Now a few years later, he’s dating another high schooler. What’s the age difference between them?

He asks if she’s safe. After sleeping around while drunk, is he?

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