All Comments on 'Mr. Peters and the Cell Phone'

by Charles Petersunn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Yea, I can relate to that!

Nice spin on spank, combination of so many things!

ChucsSiteChucsSiteabout 15 years ago
It was short and very similar

to some of the others, but the twists came in the telephone conversations, especially with the other girls who had had similar experiences. That was really hot. It might have been hotter had her father actually thought out loud where the reader could visualize with him the sexual thoughts he had from the sounds he heard. I have now read most of Mr. Petersunn's stories, and I like them very much. I was hoping that this one might have a "squirt" climax, but perhaps he will provide such an ending on another story. Another thing I noticed that most of the girls in his stories have "just a wisp" of hair on their pussy. And, this seems natural, not shaved. Personally, I really love the individuality that an unshaven pussy provides to the girl. I love to see them fully unshaven or shaved neatly but leaving most of the hair, sometimes in a design. My experiences seemed to indicate a much higher percentage of girls with considerable pussy hair than Mr. Petersunn's stories indicate. I just watched an old porn movie "Taboo II" and was delighted with all the hairy cunts. I hope this author will find some soon (perhaps one on his youngest daughter) and maybe even a squirter!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
please for tricia

what about Tricia ? she is the best charakter ,so pure ... And you can make tuff nut of her, for mr Peters ... sory for bad english ... You are very talented , best story series I've ever read ... story might start 1. with them going shoping new outfits for her , 2. modeling show with litle touching 3.day two , mr. Peters welcomes her in world , of alchohol , still nothing hapens , 4. day 3 he play role of god father , giving her full attention and spice it up with money 5.day 4 her 18 birthday he bay her a car , than going shoping second time but this time he pick litle extra... now he take her to motel ,she start modeling , he makes a drinks, litle extra comes in...he start shooting pictures of her, while she models , he make her dance for him , he tell her to strip to bra and panties while dancing , he still shoting , he now start recording , then he tells her to strip , unwillingly she start , then he give her a spank , telling her how she is a bad girl still recording.Next he black maill her ... he tells her to sleep , becouse he will start making web site tommorow ... this are just ideas , pllease replay back i wont your opinion , with hope best regards

ptebadenptebadenover 7 years ago
The best of the last chapters

If you mix spanking and handjob, the resault wiil always be satisfactory

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