All Comments on 'Mr. Right? Ch. 04'

for their Monday date. I'm sure he's going to wow her and blow her away. I'm glad Kathy decided to bow out "gracefully" finally. Great job.

PLEASE KEEP GOING. I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS AND SOON!

I loved how her friend bowed out so that Stacie and Matt could persue their relationship. I'm so into this story and I can't wait to finish reading the rest of it. This is definitely print book reading material. You need to take your talents to a publisher and get paid to do this because I would be the first in line to purchase every book wrote by you.

Nice. Glad Kathy was a big girl about the whole thing.

for them, she was well getting on my nerves and I'm glad she's gone, to let them do their thing.

I agree. Even better, I'm glad she came to the conclusion herself. It didn't ruin their friendship and made her revelation more personal.

Damn I want a man like Matt

Love it keep up the good work....

Really enjoyed this. Just long enough, too.

Really enjoy Matt's and Staci's interactions, although if I were her, I'd pop him in the chops for every lewd remark he makes (up to this point). I loved her shriek and throwing the shoe at him. :)

Great detail and balance in what both think when they embrace, kiss and make out. That's a great idea. Keep it up! :)