All Comments on 'Mr. Right? Ch. 11'

and great authors are few and far between for my taste, so when one of you pop up it's always a pleasure to read, and u are no exception, i have enjoyed all of your stories, i actually re-read this story a few times, reading it just the other day because of the lack of fresh strong storylines, so seeing mr right 11 was a nice surprise, btw twin shifters, u gunna get back to that story as well?? lol

Didn't give you 100 because it's the end. And that makes me sad.

However, I have to agree with the anonymous poster on all counts- Fabulous, fabulous, fabulous! You're one of the strongest writers on lit. Hands down.

So I'm dying to see how you finish the twin-shifters story, plus Alex and Tiffany's story. I know that wasn't just a throw-away reference there!

To be fair, I was happy with what I had thought was the end (chapter 10) but this is even better. Awesome. I look forward to your next effort.

And this one was wonderful. I loved this story. I liked that the controversy with Max and his disapproval of Matt's choice of Staci, or his Ana, as his life mate was revealed in reflection. Even Kathy was neutralized rather easier than usual, while Felicia quickly became her own bad joke. Not all situations need an ex who won't take "no" for an answer and goes all psycho. And there are people who are drawn to each other and instantly know that they have finally met "the one." Time was spent to develop a friendship and relationship, build a foundation on which Matt and Ana are now happily building their family. Hate is over-rated as Max eventually realized. Happiness and happy endings are still in!!! Thanks for the great read!!!! ~Bluegardenia

Thanks for a great read.

Love your stories!

Just sad it is the end...or is it? Maybe you could do a story on Alexander and Tiffany, fleshing out their love in more detail and maybe give them a more interesting ending with us seeing how their Dad (Papa Rosenbloom) finally comes round? Just a thought!

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site. I'm highly impressed by talented authors such as yourself. I'm still shocked I didn't have to pay to read such a great story (but I would). It's now 5:30 am and I have to be up at 7 to get ready for work.

Wow!!!! That was a Great story !!!! I felt like u just threw in that ending with the brothers. It be nice to hear their story.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very well writen. I enjoyed it immensely.

This story was very well written, i loved the ending, so cute!!!

keep it up

THIS IS SUCH A LOVING, YET IT'S ALSO STREAKED WITH REALITY OF WHAT CAN AND DOES HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE. I REALLY ENJOYED THIS, LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE STORIES FROM THIS AUTHOR...

Loved it!

BEST ONE I READ SO FAR, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So SO SO good. I just loved this story.

Thank you great story I really liked it especially what their lives turned out to be in the end great ending!!

omg I loved everything about it from the beginning to the end it wasnt too long or too short omg >.< i love it so much MAKE ANOTHER!

Loved all the LOVE!!!!!!!!!!

Your writing is engaging and holds your audience from chapter to chapter. You should fill this one out a little more and send it to be published. I know I would definately buy a novel from you. Awesome writing and a well developed story!

I really enjoyed this story! I just finished before I have to do other things today. I enjoyed the humor and there was good balance and flow to it. I agree with one of the posters that you should fill out the story a bit more and send to get published. Looking forward to reading other stories you add here!

I loved this story. It was so sexy and so sweet, my favorite combination! Please continue writing more stories!

It is strange how life comes at one and too many times folks aren't prepared to go for what is rightfully theirs. It takes balls and a leap of faith.

You should make a story about how they ended up together.

I enjoyed the story and it is provides lessons in hope and determination That is what it takes to make a relationship work once love is there

This story tied together so many things. The overall theme seemed to be about following one's heart. Matt and his brothers are heroes in this story and thank you for telling it so well.

This is a great story. Just loved it. I laughed a lot throughtout the story. Thank you. You're a great writer. I was most definitely entertained :) Thank you again for sharing your talent and best of luck with it!

You rocked this series!

absolutely loved this story you one hell of a writer, i enjoyed each and every chapter

This is the best story ive read on here I loved it!!!!

I loved this story from beginning to end! Thank you for being one of the only writers on this website to actually FINISH a story! Thank you!

You should consider writing a story about Alexander.

I could not stop reading it. If only men like Matt existed in the real world. I would love to read about Alex & Tiffany I am sure there is a other great story there. I love this types of stories just wish there were more of them.

I would like to read how Matt's brothers hooked up with their current lovers. Another excellent story. I've enjoyed them each.

I concur I would love stories about the other brothers. I love your writing.

Love the conclusion well written n realistic... Please consider publishing...

I enjoyed this story from the beginning to the end. I really love the beautiful and sexy take on love between young adults to matured, fun & exotic married adults. I hope you are planning more in the future and maybe a slice of life between Ana and Matt.

Again great work :D

I loved this story so much and I wanted to thank you for sharing your talent.

Loved it from chapter 1. Matt was a sweetheart,we should all have one. Keep writing. Agreed with the previous comments.

If this was an actual book I would purchase it. This story was well written and thought out! From chapter 1 to chapter 11, it's one of my top 10 favorites. Keep writing and I will keep reading! PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE, PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE! consider having your work published. You deserve it!

Best Story Ever

Love your writing! Let us know when you start writing books! 💗

Not only is your writing really good, but the story itself is realistic. Many stories I read here seem a bit forced in their happy endings, yet this is something I can definitely see happening in real life. I love the added elements of Matt's brothers being so diverse in their choices and that it wasn't a picture perfect reunion. Wonderful job, indeed! Please continue!

So fitting to end this way. No need to see how it works out, since we the readers can form our own conclusions.

I really love reading about Annabelle--she does seem like such a little lady, the best part of Ana; Matthias sounds so adorable too. It seems so real and it's a real change to see it feel like real life also. The father cutting out Matt is still SO real today and the mom fixing things is a great touch. I know my mom told me that if I brought home a lovely black lady that made me happy that she'd be very happy too, so that touch hit home with me.

You crafted such an incredible story in so many ways. Thanks again for such a series and I loved reading every installment. :)

This story was amazing I loved every bit and I like the way it ended glad they can all be a happy family 😊

I really loved reading this one - hope there is more coming...?

I absolutely adored this series. Thank you for the epilogue as well.