All Comments on 'Mr. Rob and the Witches Ch. 02'

I would like to see another chapter. Great story....!

A bit over the top for me, but still, well written and very erotic.

Well done.

Great story ,Enjoyed reading it Continue onnnnn....

So great it cannot end here. Please consider more chapters, make a book if you want. You are a terrific writer, your build of characters was superb and story telling rate with the best sellers.

you must continue this story,it is one of the most truly erotic ones on this site.

Enjoyed this story concept very much. Would like to see you do another chapter as follow-up on some interesting characters.

Ahabscribe, you've written one of the best, hottest, and most sensuous stories I've read on this site. Thank You. Ronnie W.

This is not my usual area of interest. However, your story was fun and enjoyable. My only suggestion would be to bring it down a little. It was a little over the top. I vote for a Ch. 3. Very well done.

I read your first chapter and completely loved it! And what a great continuation of the story! I know how much time and effort it takes to write a story of this magnitude, and I just wanted you to know, your effort is very much appreciated! This has to be one of the best erotic stories I've ever read!

Absolutely Fantastic!

Keep up the good work!

You really outdid yourself with this Sequel. This part was even better and hotter than the first part (Chapter 1). You improved on perfection which is very hard to do. I believe that you let the this story rest and not do a Sequel. Instead you should let the readers imagination this it from here.

Not my normal taste in stories, but I loved it. Very Hot.

please write more!

This set of stories is really something special. I can't tell you how deeply engrossed in the story I was. It is now close to 2 AM, but I HAD to finish reading! Your character development is superb and the story line is so well thought out and delivered. I look forward to more chapters in this tale.

johnfrd@comcast.net

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the scale only gos as far as 100, should be more for this story. thank you

I can only echo the sentiment , MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thankyou! A wonderfully erotic story.

I really loved the characters ....

and the schoolgirl uniforms! :D

I can see how the Muse/Lady took over and allowed the words to flow.... an amazingly erotic and spiritual high you captured so beautifully with some wonderful characters. Am not sure if a Chapt 3 is in order here..... but thank you for the lovely ride....

Please continue this story again with the developing witches and their future. Take it as each finds out the pregnancies are sure, etc.

Very good story, please continue it.

Great story .wonderfully written!!!

The witching hour has bridged to the witching night, and I loved it! Turn this into a novella/novel and I would buy it!

Liked this, will there be a sequel? Kind of a cliffie atm :(

Incredible story! Would love for it to continue!

More more more pleeeeeeeeez this is the best story yet i think i may be addicted

Creative, imaginative and sexy! I enjoyed this little series very much.

By an asylum graduate !!!!!!!!

Title says it all!

I hope this series is continued. It is pretty good.

Amazing story you should continue this story line, but there at the end I feel you got to wrapped up in the goddess experience

This is worth a few more chapters, I would like to see how the characters develop and their future paths.

Kind regards

Mr Wolf

If I had to choose a fantasy to live, this is it. Awesome sex, but based on caring and love. Nobody hurt; everybody wins. A really feel good story. Cries out for continuation.

Brilliant story please do further chapters

David

Such a good series deserves to be continued. 5*

This is a great story and I'd love to read more. More chapters, please! Thanks for some very hot, engaging stories!

VisualPerv

I honestly hope you will write more to this story. Loved it!

I love this story and the little twist's and turns keep me wanting more.

Thanks for the great story, but I think it is far from over with the next generation coming along.

and as if by witchery the story appears and fullfills all my wishs

OMG! I'M SERIOUSLY LOVING THIS STORY!!! Please, for the love of all that's sexy as hell, keep it going!!!!!!

A Freakin amazing was hooked from the get go and it just got better my question to you author is WTF is next ?

Awesome!!

In fact, AWESOMELY awesome!

I have to agree with others - awesome. This is one of the best stories I've ever read on literotica. You need to keep writing. :)

I really enjoyed this tale of witches. Bless Mr. Rob!!. Wish I were him!! Thank you for such a fun and very entertaining story of loving witches. MORE PLEASE!

Wish this series would continue or a sequel series was written for it.

Ahab, if you are still monitoring this site (or even still alive), you’ve reached the pinnacle.

The adage “ always leave them wanting more“ is the apotheosis of any writer. Happy endings are for idiots and losers. You have created a universe where neither gains any merit.

Kudos

Okay, obviously, Ahabscribe or someone associated with him IS monitoring his stories\reader posts, as this chapter was 'updated' 12/28/2021...

That being said...if Ahab is still around...WHERE IS CHAPTER 3 to this storyline??!! "Someone" can write it, or at least tell us about Ahabscribe and his status!

This...this...while sssooo out-there and realistic, there has to be more; as other readers have posted, WE WANT MORE, there is so much to still be delved into...the pregnancies, the family, the other covens that exist, how expansive the story is is EXPONENTIAL...

Please, give us something...to hangout hopes on, or grieve our loss(?)...

Outfuckingstanding story, very well written and told...............():\

Maddogintexas I agree chapter 3 please

This is the 2nd time I have read your story and even though it's a bit over the top, after all that would take some seriously strong stamina to satisfy 4 women and I love the Witchcraft approach so if you could see yourself adding more chapters then all of your readers will definitely come back to read them cos we really want to see where you can take them.

Brilliant, well done and thank you for sharing with us.

Wonderful story. You should continue the series! Maybe throw in some conflict from some self-righteous women, etc. Thank you!