All Comments on 'Mrs Cane Ch. 01'

damn that was a hot story can't wait fot the next part wow i got hard as soon as i found out the couple was older like myself i would like i pic of you to see what you look like and maybe fantasize about you as Mrs. Williams lol

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Even though she is 49 years old, she could still get pregnant by the old man, and give Mr. and Mrs. Cane a grand child. That could perk up the old man and give him a new lease on life.

That would bring Alice and the old couple closer together, and would be a good way to embarrass and humilate Alice's husband, watching her belly grow with Mr. Cane's baby.

Perhaps Alice would be made to do all of her work in the nude, so the old couple could watch her body change as she went through the pregnancy cycle.

Linda, Alice's daugher, could be a toy for Mrs. Cane to play with and perhaps become pregnant by the old man too.

A good read and I enjoyed it

Thanks.

Mrs. Cane is a bit of a bitch; not that there's anything wrong with that. I'm personally drawn to bitchy women. I like their teasing as long as they please me. anxiously awaiting the next installment.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It had the flavour of Victorian erotica, as if it had come from the pages of 'The Pearl' magazine.

Thought it was a really erotic situation. It is easy to imagine the kind of things that can go on in a large house when all the doors are locked and the curtains drawn. Can't wait for the next part.

BRAVO! MORE PLEASE................

Gosh MaryR what a lovely story. So nice to hear about your knickers and I bet you would look lovely with them on. We sure do need a follow up. xx

... with 'cane' in the title! I'm so pleased I decided to read this one - well done, MaryR, I can hardly wait to find out what happens next in this 'interesting' menage!

This is a damn good story, It seems to me

this takes place in England. Well they call

panties or shorts knickers.

I like how Mrs. Williams likes the old guy and

curious about how Linda works out. And what

will happen to Dereck?

A great beginning I hope to many more exciting experiences. I not only had a huge hard on from reading this I also had to wank. yum

Excellent story with wonderful possibilities

Can we have some more please.

Mary,

This was very nice. I loved it.

Jon

Mary, you have made my old prick swell to enormous proportions with this wonderfully rude story.

I do think this does need a second and maybe even a third chapter. There are so many possibilities available here and the older couple's name teases us with some of them. Alice and Linda have made a good start and I am sure can extend their 'level of employment' in all kinds of ways, including initiating Derek into a whole new role in the household.

I hope you are planning on adding more chapters to this story. It has some excellent potential.

More but with both Mrs. Williams and her daughter----Like to see Mrs. Cane get into the action

There are so many wonderful hints - what are Mrs Cane's plans for the future? Please tell us about cissy Derek and daughter Linda...who will pleasure Mrs Cane...and how? And then there is the name...is Cane going to be more than just a name?

Another really sexy story, Mary. I'd love to read more!

I think what I liked about this one was the matter-of-fact narrative style. Almost as if the protagonist is telling her story to a reporter. Some good writing here. My favorite passage was the paragraph beginning, "It was not explicitly said but there must have been a sort of sexual inclination in her words,..." Excellent!

The tone later was veddy proper, even to the point of the old boy and his wife still calling her Mrs. Williams as he undressed, fondled, and took her with the missus looking on. All in all, a fascinating scene.

Ms Mary

i adore Your writing and the mind that creates such erotic prose. Everything i have read has been arousing and wonderful and i can't get enough. Thank You so much.

joe

Hi Mary, hope you add the next chapter to a great story

It really turns me on when you talk about how compliant and fearful

Dereck is with his tiny dink, which you can't even feel inside you.

The embarrassment, the humiliation - is arousing. What is more arousing is how well you understand all such moods!

Congratulations and top of the season! from your friend, Bill In Canada

How lovely to have a personal staff such as this couple and daughter Do continue with this story

I was reminded of that scene in the Manchurian Candidate,where the soldiers are seated by the ladies having their tea. This is such a world that is created,a very gentle private place.And the mysterious Mrs Cane-surely a wife in a million. I wonder do these stories cause people to behave differently over time.