by Yuiqalla
you put effort into this but there was so much descriptive verbiage that it became unreadable.relax and concentrate on the story we have enough descriptions of her butt,move past and tell the story
This was such a great read. Your hyper focus on Emilys big ass was amazing!
The story was mostly good, but there were parts that were so ridiculous that it Brought me out of the story. Some of the descriptions of her butt were absurd, and then the costumed clown sex was weird.
Auugh that was so fucking good. I love a big ass that loves anal.
It is OK to just use a single adjective at a time. You don't have to list off every one you can think of every time you mention her butt. It really takes away from the story.
I really enjoyed this story. The over description, and fetishization of Mrs Finkleβs ass, which is the star of this story, really took me to a perverted place. Loved it. Looking forward to reading more of your storyβs
I love how upbeat and erotic this story feels. No shade against gritty stories, but it's great to read fun and sexy stories about plump sexy ass.