All Comments on 'Mrs. Finkle's Big Butt'

by Yuiqalla

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cartmanrlscartmanrlsabout 5 years ago
this not good

you put effort into this but there was so much descriptive verbiage that it became unreadable.relax and concentrate on the story we have enough descriptions of her butt,move past and tell the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
So great

This was such a great read. Your hyper focus on Emilys big ass was amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

The story was mostly good, but there were parts that were so ridiculous that it Brought me out of the story. Some of the descriptions of her butt were absurd, and then the costumed clown sex was weird.

rendomrendomabout 5 years ago
Love it..

Soo vivid. Took me to the dreamland.

BobbyRogersBobbyRogersabout 5 years ago
So glad to get more of your writing

Auugh that was so fucking good. I love a big ass that loves anal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Use fewer adjectives

It is OK to just use a single adjective at a time. You don't have to list off every one you can think of every time you mention her butt. It really takes away from the story.

AssmandyisAssmandyisabout 4 years ago
Love this...

I really enjoyed this story. The over description, and fetishization of Mrs Finkle’s ass, which is the star of this story, really took me to a perverted place. Loved it. Looking forward to reading more of your story’s

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Hot story love the big ass

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Hot story.. Love the big ass

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Hot story..... Loving the huge ass

bubblebuttslutzbubblebuttslutzabout 2 years ago

I love how upbeat and erotic this story feels. No shade against gritty stories, but it's great to read fun and sexy stories about plump sexy ass.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

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dsperk2000dsperk2000about 1 year ago

Enjoyable and light hearted

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I'm just a woman coping with having an unusually large bottom, and the unbearable joy and overwhelming happiness of my longing to be completely submissive.