All Comments on 'Mrs. J Ch. 01'

Erotic, believable, poiniant, emotional and the grammar and spelling was correct. Looking forward to the entire saga!!!!

Good work from a story standpoint and technically. Very erotic read.

There is absolutely no scale high enough for me to rate this. GOD, that was erotic!

Sexy what else can I say, one of the best if not the best I have ever read. Well written.

What a great story, that had a beginning , a middle and a long, long ending that should never finish. it was gentle but there was a lot of passion

Great sex I would love cummm inside her lol

a substitute, a replacement, or a surrogate?

Just as it was earlier, Lauren will always be an almost but not quite, Kathy.

Mrs. J/Kathy, will never be a life partner for Jason. Nor will Lauren.

The unattainable can be heartbreaking.

Sorry Jason your having a difficult time, the consolation must be helping some I would imagine.

lauren could be quite a lot of help if you could see her...

I see a second chapter, I'll get back to you...

Excellent piece of erotic writing! You, among my many favorites, are why I come to this website! Loved the slow buildup and the sexy,, very sexy Mrs J character. Can't wait to read your other works, keep it up!

VERY hot and also tender...

Loved her eavesdropping to the girls talking about her and him.

5 and fave story-already fave author due to Word Of Mouth.

Looking forward to Ch 2

Very good story, can't wait for the continuation.

5* don't do it justice

This story deserve more than 5*.

Second reading, even better this time 10*

Agree with Helen1899 below...like this so much still on various levels 2nd time around...

young, dumb(only one condom-?!) and full of cum Jason-

experienced(kegels-!) milf Kathy, dogging her daughter, w/proper adult woman's muffin

'pull out before you come.' famous last words-she's late 30's-?there was a much safer option, but she 'flinched' when he brushed her pucker, tho of course no lube handy even if she had been willing

and, gentle observation from honors English student-it's taut, not taught

in any event very much looking forward to Ch. 02

I liked this story and eagerly read chapter two, and liked the oh-so-predicyable ending, but really hated the decision to not allow voting or comments.

Really wmpy way to try to avoid reality of learning what the readers like or don't like.

If I could drop the rating of this chapter, I would.

And eben though I'm not an honors english student, I agree with roverone about how apparently you've not been 'taut' the diference between taut and taught.