All Comments on 'Mrs Johnston Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
a good start...

This a story which is off to a good start...........but then ends far too abruptly. (Yes, I saw the "Ch.01" part.)

As a stand-alone posting (which it is), it's a little implausible but a promising start, and then the story abruptly ends in a rather odd manner.

imho,

--KVK

AnonymousAnonymous19 days ago

All things come to he who waits. 18 years? Glad I can just go on to Chapter 2 right away.

Thanks.

MLJ

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