by david450
This a story which is off to a good start...........but then ends far too abruptly. (Yes, I saw the "Ch.01" part.)
As a stand-alone posting (which it is), it's a little implausible but a promising start, and then the story abruptly ends in a rather odd manner.
imho,
--KVK
All things come to he who waits. 18 years? Glad I can just go on to Chapter 2 right away.
Thanks.
MLJ