All Comments on 'Mrs. Simmons'

it made me feel as if I knew the type. But I don't. I expected the usual, but the way you spun the narrative, made me stay. It made me laugh, too. I mean this as a compliment.

Chapters 2

You captured the geeks personality very well. I guess Bobbie might test as an INTJ. And that line ... each touch of unaccustomed origins quadruples the output of my arousal per inch urged on ... made my day. Nice work!

Excellently done. The reader can't help wondering about Ms. S's motivation just as Bobbi does.

Loved it!

I’ve read this story four times already. It still gives me the chills, because there are no hiccups, it just floats along until the end. I love the femdom genre, yet I hate the run off the mill Mistress stuff. That’s why I’m addicted to this kid of storytelling. Great writing, thanks for sharing!

This genre is my favorite by far and you are a masterful writer. Well done!!!!!!!!

The setup for a follow up is perfect. Please continue!

Fantastic read can’t wait for the next instalment

Really enjoyed this one. Nice writing, naughty imagination. I like a bit more cfnm aspects but this story is more about bdsm and D/s exchange. All good. Looking forward to reading more.

L o R

One of the hottest, most erotic Domme/sub stories I have read in some time. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

I have never thought about being a sissy before. Now, after reading this (and changing my panties) I never want to be anything else. I love this woman so very much, and want to belong to her!

Roxanne Lanyon

I would be going to her place the next day, even though I have a good idea what might happen to me.

What a long winded story just to read about a woman sticking a butt plug up his add.

Plus the grammar was wrong.

"Hasn't lost none of its grit," is a double negative.

Hasn't lost any of its grit. Or even has lost none of its grit.

Great, please write a second chapter

Nice premise.

Generally well written. But a multitude of misspellings/wrong words used. An editor is needed. Really.

Se doesn't tease him with any parts of her body. Se knows he watches her breasts and ass, but no showing of them. And no forcing him to describe his fantasizing about them.

She never determines hos sexual experience. Is he a virgin? Has he ever eaten a pussy? Has he had a blowjob? Has a girl ever hiven him a nice long, sensual, edging handjob?

Does he watch porn? What kind?

Four stars.

Using long sentences for little action forces the author to write to say nothing. The author excels in this exercise. Bravo for those who like it.