All Comments on 'Mrs. Young Ch. 06'

28K words?! You're spoiling us lol. And wow, that's a harsh place to leave it at. I feel bad for Jenny. Although I would like for there to be a happy ending for those 2, I just don't see how this story can end in anything but sadness. Great story! Looking forward to the finale!

28K words?! You're spoiling us lol. And wow, that's a harsh place to leave it at. I feel bad for Jenny. Although I would like for there to be a happy ending for those 2, I just don't see how this story can end in anything but sadness. Great story! Looking forward to the finale!

This stroy needs more chapters.

Can you continue and extend this to multiple parts? Thanks!

Sorry mate, too slow in the plot and I reckon that’s because you have actually lost the plot.

Way too wordy. Kind of a waste. Didn't go anywhere, nothing learned, nothing creative.

I really liked this series until this part, you have the great knack of descriptive writing, but you, in my view, made Matt a little boy I. His behaviour, coming on 20 and acting like a horny 13 year old, it just wasn’t the same guy, from previous parts, I'll have to go see if you have followed this up with Cora, I never know when the story I'm reading had been posted, sometimes it’s years ago.

At least 3 chapters too long, no real content, no believable story, just average at best

Really enjoyed the series so far, please keep going.

What an absolute "gem of an erotic story" ! You have much talent as a writer and I hope you keep on writing ... especially hot storied like this one is. It has love, drama, suspense, action and above all ... it's EROTIC. Well done ! I'm also glad you're adding a 7th chapter (maybe to close this story). 5 stars all the way so far. Cheers !

Wow. More specific feedback and comments pooped into my head reading, but for now, I just want to say, as hot as it was, and is was so so hot, this was really a lovely story with two lovely protagonists. I feel so comforted by thus last chapter, well, in between being turned on.