All Comments on 'Mud and Magic Ch. 04'

I love the story so far. A good world being built. Good characters and development.

I just wish i found this story when you had finished it as i want to keep reading!

I enjoyed this chapter. Great writing, excellent world build up and awesome characters. I gave it 4 stars. Guys on guys ain't my thing but I reckon I'll stick with the story and skip past those bits.

I'll be keeping an eye on my feed for the next chapter.

Happy writing.

TDW

what a great story, love the action and plot

It was the boys second time and you turned it into an orgy. I love it. Love the world building, love the growth in Rhys, great characters. This is what fantasy should be!

Yeah, that was a great read. I like how the friendships are slowly building and everyone isn’t just automatically best friends for life. Seems more natural that way.