All Comments on 'Mum and the Daughters of the Moon'

That was amazing

innocence and love was throughout the story

Very nicely done! Looking forward to more.

Write mom-son or bro-sis.

I would be happy if you wrote a second chapter for these characters. Thanks.

Please let there be a part 2..with Andrea....threesome with both Kate,Andrea.....Kate become pregnant......any such stuff

if this is fantasy at least let the poor boy have a big dick -his sister wasn't even impressed-description said sister action too where was that?

Very excellent story and the pacing is not too fast or slow, story isn't cheesy or douchy, would love it if this turned into one of the longer series on this site, can't wait to see what you do with this gem

I agree with the others that this is very good. Good characters, all of them. Witchery. Maybe they're on to something.

Very good story; definitely added to my Favorite's

List. A suggestion: maybe a spinoff story featuring

on Morganna; I found myself sympathetic to her

for some reason.

I loved it. I was hoping that Andrea would have joined them in the shower and bed but maybe in chapter two? Five stars and a favorite point!

Thanks for sharing.

Fun and hot. Witchy witchy fuck fuck.

Hope to see more chapters as he works his way through his sister and all the phone numbers he was given.

Very good first publication. Good story line, lots of possibilities for sequels. One small critique, make the sex scenes a little longer.

If this is the first then by all the Witches in the kingdom, it better not be the last. Story well thought out, well paced and with good character development. It could be a stand alone or the great start to a series. I do not mind, as others seem to, that the sex was short because I don't particularly care for the extended words and capitals, etc, that many put in their stories. I do hope you keep writing and do not limit yourself to one genre, but try others as well. Cheers to an excellent first. Told you I was a lousy critic, lol.

Looking forward to the next installment of this excellent story.

Well written with lots of humour and an excellent build up. Top marks and I hope you write again soon.

I'd like to see this story continue.

It's hard to believe this is your first story here. Fantastic -- please keep writing.

I like that you placed it in a real town; I agree with another commenter that please keep the sex with the mother. And... anal would be wonderful.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Please write another chapter but keep things between the Mom and son. Let that relationship grow, maybe let her decide to get pregnant. If you try and pull in the sis and the other available women it will get ruined. As a recent virgin there is still alot of sex for him to learn about. Let mom teach him.

I do love some good humor mixed in and not sure if you meant it to be that way but it actually made me laugh a couple times, well done, looking forward to the next chapter :)

Found it very interesting would love to see where you take the story if you do more

A great read. Well put together and I loved the characters. Can't wait for the sequel when he takes the sister. Thank you.

Just read this. As a rule I don't usually read authors with only one work as they tend to be not that great. Glad I made an ex eption in this case. Great characterisation and some nice humour. Shame that there was never a follow up with sister joining in the family fun

I thought the story was great. Loved it. AAAAAA++++++

i love that Mum is tall and full-figured, my ideal! Plus: she's a witch! Maybe by dipping his wick in a witch, he has become a warlock. Delightful possibilities! I have read this this morning as Part 2 is published today, so i don't even have to wait on further developments of the coven. May High-Priestess Kate long reign!

amazing story