All Comments on 'Mum Ch. 03'

Fantastic - beautifully written too, as well as being highly erotic.

Than it was for us

Beautifully done..so well written...thank you.

What a great story and the writing made it seem like I was right there with them enjoying the sex and the tenderness of a mother and son having first their first time together. I think the most satisfying thing was the fact that "Mom" wasn't a slim trim award winning beauty with huge tits that stood straight out, she was what an average lady for her age would be. Thanks

"Oh John, fuck me, harder honey, I'm going to cum!" mum shouted. I began thrusting upward so my pelvis was banging against her clit harder and faster. Just then the door swung open, Jen's mouth hung open with a look of disbelief on her face.

This was/is a good series. My only comment is "Better last than never." 5 star series.

You had me till the language got abusive. I can't stand that.

A fitting climax (no pun intended) to the story of mum. I loved the gentleness throughout the series. I do agree with another as I also felt the language at the end was unnecessary, but that is my choice. Still worth 5*.

It's been said that good things 'cum' to those who wait and your offering had that happen lovingly. The pacing of the story was just about perfect. Even though you had the mother request that her son talk dirty to her, you could have toned it down and still have had it be descriptive and erotic. I still gave the story a 5 star rating, but only because Literotica doesn't offer an option for a partial deduction.

Great. Aged mothers are awesome